Admittedly that was the intention of the story for it to be a rush.
Recently adapted some of my short stories from Noveltrove to CHOYA https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.432876
https://chyoa.com/story/One-Gloryhole-Outside-Breeding%2C-Kentucky.18984/map The glory hole is open for business, for those of you who would...
Both good points
It could be fun, but I don't exactly why it should be limited to 10 chapters.
Nailed it.
Nothing wrong with leaving the world somewhat open. If I have any advice, don't be afraid to put your foot down if you feel someone is making...
Whilst I agree that the vast majority of good stories do have a strong hook to begin with, that hook doesn't have to be sex. I'd rather learn...
I'd still advise you take contributing to other stories into consideration. CHYOA presents a series of unique challenges compared to writing a...
Well if anyone does give you crap, they either 1. Haven't put anything out there at all 2. Are on a similar level to you 3. Were once on your...
Okay, first you need to flesh this fantasy universe of Midnick out a bit more. I'd highly recommend fleshing things out in a text document...
Do you have a link for your story, or is currently unpublished? It's rather hard to help without anything to read.
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