Sorry for the short feedback, I was exhausted at that point, let me give a more thorough review. 1st: The abilities of the gem and so forth are a...
Ok, there was already a place to put NPCs, you should have used that, but that aside, from what I read, the story was pretty decent.
I hate this time of night, there's no one to talk to...
What makes a good cover in your opinion?
Don't know what the hell was wrong, but it took five tries to like a post in story ideas just now including reloading the tab twice. (Google Chrome.)
Agreed, and if the multiple genres idea was implemented there would be plenty of room to combine the two, without them precisely overlapping: say...
Just bite the damn apple already Porneia! If you want, subscribe at the 18$ level and Ill write the damn scene FOR you!
Just Google BESM third edition pdf and it should come right up!
Jade Takasaki's Tentative Stats: Name: Jade Takasaki Species: Human Race: Asiatic (Ethnically 'Japanese-American' aka 'Nisei') (Racial Template:...
Oh, this is going somewhere, and no backstories this time! Now that we have at least one definite player (aside from me,) the game is going to...
We have one person who has expressed tentative interest, and I'm going to put it out there that both I and he are leaning towards the third...
Needs a bit of work, winning seems too easy...
Jade Takasaki is a Nisei girl in Washington state going to high school until one day she finds her forehead glowing with a yellow infinity symbol....
Putting out a call for assistance, anyone who knows the GURPS 4th Ed system please message me!
Not too many days left if you want to vote for something...
And then, occasionally, someone might surprise you with a new chapter or two...
Not quite alone, though I wish they got couples counseling instead of having passive-aggressive arguments.
There's a suggestion about that...
It is not 'done' it's got three branches already! (I get what you're saying though...)
Having not read the story I would personally file it under 'Misc'.
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