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One of my published sex scenes goes on for 9241 words, and two more in the same story last 8735 and 7947 words, respectively. Does that count as 1...
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Yes, 'okay' is definitely the word I'd use. :P
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There are got some awkward sentences sprinkled into the story here and there, like: These sentences have unnecessary pauses in them, breaking up...
There's a scene in The Hours where (a fictionalized version of) Virginia Woolf says one of the characters in her book has to die. Her husband asks...
I don't want to say ideas don't matter at all. After all, you need that initial spark of inspiration, and having a hook to pull your readers in is...
I don't remember how I first ran across CHYOA. It was years ago, my memories don't go back that far. My #1 wish is that tags were better curated.
I become miserable when I don't have some kind of Project to work on in my spare time for a long time. A couple of weeks of holiday here and there...
Anyone else becoming increasingly concerned about the inner workings of Zeebop's mind, or is it just me? :P
I've noticed that sometimes people in this thread are assigned editor rights, and other times owner rights. Out of curiosity, what drives the...
I wish all my wishes were fulfilled this quickly! :P
Oh, this one is really good! I really love the idea of Anna forcing herself to go through something to punish Tess (or vice versa), with Tess then...
Everything is sexy if you treat it like it's sexy. :P
Fair enough. :) This early in the story, I think that'd be fine, as long as you don't radically change the actual events that took place.
I like it! Male/male stuff isn't something I'm into much, but both main sex scenes (in the dorm and caught by the group) are hot and well-written....
I read the last 5 chapters, and other than the normal confusion you get from, you know, jumping into a story mid-way, it reads well. The scene...
...and then she said--get this!--"but it's purple!"
I really want this story to end with him going to a glory hole and biting a surprisingly familiar dick. TIME TRAVEL PARADOXES: SO SPOOPY
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