There's currently 42 chapter 11s, so in the interest of maybe finishing this story before I die, I'm going to start prioritizing to try and do at...
Fell behind for a bit, and an unexpectedly popular branch, but getting caught up: Chapters written: 2,296 Chapters to be written (green): 0...
I don't get a lot of feedback from readers, so when I get a comment suggesting what they'd like to see next I do feel an obligation to try and...
Never know until you try!
Okay, I looked at the Bimbo Virus. Couple more typos are evident, most especially on the first page in the title ("decency"). I like the overall...
I haven't gotten to your other story yet.
Nothing wrong with latex. Used it a few times myself. The introductory chapter is where you provide the "hook" to draw readers into the story....
Not super familiar with RWBY, so this will be more about the writing. It's very linear, which isn't bad for a story starting out, just remember...
Chapter length is good, writing is decent, you've got reasonable decision-point questions at the end of each chapter so that you could branch if...
Lot of likes & bookmarks lately - which is a good thing! But it means it's hard to make headway as the chapters hit thresholds faster than I can...
I like transformations, just for the challenge. It ends up a great deal like sex scenes, in that you want the reader to be really invested in the...
I've put a fair bit of work into the story at this point. It's not the best thing I've ever written, and all of it's been written fairly quickly,...
Just running some numbers. Here's the current chapter count: Chapter #: # of chapters (# of chapters left to be written) 1: 1 (0) 2: 2 (0) 3: 4...
Not a bad start! There are two issues I think you might consider: 1) With second person, a lot of the inner life of the characters has to be...
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