Let me adopt Bollywood to Hollywood. If nothing else, the grammar and spelling errors are enough for me to want to fix it and then I can expand...
The Mandingo society has some parts about chemicals to do that. It's about halfway in I think and could be expanded or spun off. Which I see you...
It appears greyed out to me whenever I try it. I don't know if I can access them from the tree or something but from the chapter pages I cannot.
The story Controlling My Mind (https://chyoa.com/story/Controlling-My-Mind.6981) is told from that perspective. You don't see the person in power...
You could always work on it from a step or two back. You'd probably get more people Interested in your version then.I've added a few slight...
Plus you could have the villains with different views about the incest: one who doesn't care for it but finds it hot is good to contrast with a...
One thing you may want is a male character to add to the suffering the family has. It could be a male agent there with her (a boyfriend) or a...
I'd like to adopt Antonio's. It's a really old story but I don't think Sweet Daisy has been active for years. I already have two chapters in review.
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