Friedman, may I suggest that you put a new top-tier goal for patreon at say 2000$: "We'll be able to ditch advertising completely, our Patreon...
This is, yes, the point. It is a trap, he can alter the position of various non-living things, coffee cups, iron bars, cement mixers, and so...
I've got a couple of stories I'd file under this right now...
While I, as one of those top writers with every trophy Which it is possible for me to obtain naturally see a certain value in the present system,...
Yes, they are multi-genre, conceded. One of those genres is rap. I know rapping when I hear it and that set of lyrics is a classic rap...
I say he should have raised the bar to an even thousand before publishing that to give us a cushion against future cost increases...
Ok, I wanted to keep silent here, I really fucking did, but I just can't. Bam, that "Just Can't Help," line is 100% undiluted, untreated,...
Thank you, you're right, I have a problem with that, and I'll see about finding various instances of it and editing them. I will see about...
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Ok, I haven't read very far, but I've got a couple goods/bads for you to work with/on: You're pacing is nice and zippy, you can convey a...
This thread is sort of like Story Feedback, except it's not on any one of your stories but your writing style as a whole: where, in the opinion of...
In his defense GE, he DOES, mostly: it's his punctuation and structure that's the problem. The thing that's really stuck with me, in particular,...
In my experience, it's better to take in new LIFE again, get out there and DO, this will give you a lot more material to work with much faster,...
Look, Bam, I'm not here for a fight: facts are facts, everyone can improve: me, you, everyone. Am I a bit salty that you took what I showed you...
And yet, when I show you how to improve you blatantly copy it: pot, kettle, null-colors...
Or, you might, IDK, actually try to up your game a bit and improve...? Just a thought...
I disagree. This method triggers the 'internal image violation' problem for me far worse than a photo or such. For me a photo SHATTERS the...
Ok, it's probably been clear as mud what I'm actually suggesting with these X(*) actions, so I'm going to explain a bit: our E.M. (Evil...
Meh, like most people I only heard about it in the amazing DISTURBED cover from Ten Thousand Fists, [MEDIA] but credit should be given where...
I've got suggestions for those two's names and some additional ideas about them: Author's Hangout: 1A: Title: "Seeking Help" Action: Post a...
Separate names with a comma.
