628 chapters as of this comment. Was traveling this weekend, so fewer updates than I'd hoped, on top of which there were a lot of likes/bookmarks...
There's multiple examples of it in there. But I for one won't argue if you prefer commas to periods.
Thanks. I've got something different planned if/when this story eventually reaches its natural end.
Up to 616 chapters, including two new chapter 20 endings: End: Anal Whores and End: I Want A Baby (I promise not every ending will have Lois Lane...
Might be a fun idea. There's no real visibility a to what goes into Story of the Week, and the Top Stories/Notable Stories From Backers/Notable...
The pictures in A Mole Hunt In California are a nice touch. It might be interesting to see some of the same chapters from a female agent's...
Okay, just crossed over to 601 chapters - and we're sitting at 26 chapters with 5 likes that need continuations. Which doesn't sound like much...
Strunk & White (PDF) is my go-to for questions on English grammar (with the caveat that individual author preference can trump "the rules."
If it is a complete thought, you can end it with a period. That would make the next quote the start of a new complete thought. A comma indicates...
I'm not very successful at getting participation myself, but maybe try doing a swap? "I'll write a chapter for your story if you write a chapter...
Well, it's new. Give it a little bit of time. Also, best to include a link: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Big-Boobs-Tales.18672 While I like the...
@Odysseus Sure, I'm always up for a critique! I've been checking out "A Novice Magician" off and on the last few months, though I haven't read...
@targetthyself Gotcha. Commas can be tricky things. @gene.sis In the sentence, target is obviously going for a poetic effect: two times makes a...
@targetthyself Okay, had a few minutes to look up your latest stories. I really like the premise of Curse of the Black Ooze; while Extinction...
About a week away from 600 chapters, at current rates. The good news is, there has been progress. Been getting a lot of like which has caused some...
If you want to continue the transformation route, they could take on the attributes of the critters they fuck - which, if they could find some...
Well...I live for feedback.
You might want to have an explanation chapter for how that works, because not everyone reads the forums.
And the first epilogue, Epilogue: Wedded Bliss. A little lovey-dovey, but I'm sappy enough to like a happy ending. I guess if it got 20 likes I...
Writing has been a little slow lately, with the like overtaking progress with chapters the last ten days or so. Which is good (more likes, so...
Separate names with a comma.
