I don't think you need to change the perspective (as you mention, you've already gone this far with it, it would be a pain to change it). Game...
Well, you only have two chapters so far, so maybe I just haven't gotten used to the style.
Well, there's...not much there yet. One chapter deep, more breaking the fourth wall than not, and I'd try to avoid too much violence or you'll run...
Well, you've got a pretty decent main path, but not a lot of branches, and several of those dead end. The writing is fine (first person isn't my...
Congrats.
Definitely something a little tricky, and I'm definitely not an expert on it...but a possible approach is to ask a few questions: 1) Who are the...
Thanks!
Okay. It's probably going to be a slow corruption, and I'll probably include a couple different variations on it, and given the time it takes me...
Well, it's science fiction, so...you could do some interesting body modifications. Like one of them wakes up with a dick, or a second vagina or...
I'm not familiar with the source material, so that might be affecting things, but nothing much has happened yet. Four chapters, good length, but...
It's not bad. I'm not particularly fond of the short chapters (and I mean the <500 word ones, not just ones that are brief but plot-significant)...
Yellow Fever's not my particular kink, but it seems like a good start along the main path - or at least, I'm curious what your plans are for...
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I like what there is of it, good bit of replayability, the prose is fine. I think the mechanics work well - and I appreciate the fact that you...
A little slow and linear so far, but I'm curious to see where this goes (although yes "cheating spouses" as a category sort of implies where it...
I like it so far. The scenes are neither too short or too long, a good amount of variation in the action. Fair number of dead ends, but that's...
...and with chapter #193, every branch so far goes to 8.1. I know it's taking a while to fill out the different paths instead of plunging ahead...
So, the basic solution I came up with: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Cunthugger.429041 is that the "aliens" are actually biomechanical drones designed...
More a bit of bookkeeping/background than anything else, but I prepared the Kryptonite Guide page, which gives an idea of what the functions of...
So, we're at about 175 chapters and counting for Lois Lane's Night Out - it doesn't look like that much because it's only a max of 9 chapters deep...
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