Oh, yea, I'm just saying, the acting, good god: the acting...!
Sadly, the small test I just did of the program appears to bear you out... Ok, let me critique what you just wrote, and maybe that will help:...
I await it avidly: but, would also like to say this: god that show was awful in the 90s...
Um... Well, I'm just going to throw this out there, right at the outset, and then do what you've asked... 1: the 'you need a hole in the head'...
Well, you can start by giving us an actual link....?
Not even fucking touching this one...
I see that you're stubborn, and that means you just might amount to something, so, here's a more thorough critique of your idea: it will start...
A link would be nice.
Not a big fan of infidelity and DEFINITELY didn't like that choosing to stay and work made no difference.
I would love to offer some critique: first, if you're going to post a thread asking for advice on a story: provide a link to the story...
A link would be quite helpful.
Why the fuck would we do that when you can just visit this website here? https://www.grammarly.com
OMFingG! Hands down, bar none, this is the best story I've ever read on this site! I literally had to get myself off five times while I was...
A link would help...
John Doe must DIE!!!
Don't use living people as fodder for your fantasies without their permission.
As the source is behind a paywall, I cannot comment.
The aspect I LIKE about Lara is that she's a badass bitch who doesn't take any shit, so forgive me if I give this one a pass.
This is completely unbelievable, and not in a good way. There is no explanation given of how these new wonder drugs were invented, who at the FDA...
A link perhaps?
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