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This could have been so much more: describe the scene, have the conversations! What you have right now feels more like an outline than an actual...
Sad, this could have been awesome, but it's only one chapter...
Link, please?
This is good, but not really to my taste.
I read the first chapter. Nope, this is gonna be a no from me...
Omg! Why is this not one of the top stories on the site? Anyone whose a hetero/bi-sexual male: READ THIS STORY!
That's where I would file it at the present time: but see the idea here: https://forum.chyoa.com/threads/category-organization.963/#post-14419
It looks top flight, but work on expanding all branches...
It's a very interesting premise but for my money, I'd like to see more of the first line thread string...
WHY DID YOU NEVER CONTINUE THIS!!!!
Do not like: MC is a cheating bastard.
This is clearly an incest set up, so, I'm veering clear...
OMG! SO FUCKING GOOD! There's just one wincey problem, one tiny flaw... I want them both to be pregnant at the same time with each other's babies!
Here's my recommendation: drop the premise of Katie ending up exposed and humiliated and recategorize the story as something like "group sex" or...
I'm sorry, but humiliation isn't something I enjoy, however, I will say this, if what you hint at the rest of the time is any indication, THIS,...
Links et ça vous plait?
I know I'm not going to be playing anymore, but I have a question for you on that score: what version of that concept are you going to be...
I would once have said: "Yes, there should," but due to personal experience my answer is now "NO" because if that were the case there are some...
We could have it be The Professora...
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