I think what may be turning people off your story more than anything is the pervasive incest theme between Edward and Lucy, as well as their...
A different person's voice to join the discussion. We all saw where things went with only one participant in the other thread... (And by the...
Well, Fury's Road has stalled for the next little while...
Because I've had only one player responding this whole time, We've decided to split the story into two alternate parhs: in this path others can...
The problem is that depth is advertised but by contrast, breadth tends not to be...
Waiting on another reply...
(HAHAHAHA!) That WAS an option, just saying... In any case, you've decided that Zugzwang is not something you're comfortable with, I'll try to...
... ... Seriously? Are you really going to give your host incredibly short-lived supernatural seduction powers as a way to 'help' her deal...
Just check the story, I hit 'save as draft' so it should appear at the bottom of the first page for you...
Care to go take a look at what I have so far and see if you like it?
}Ayup.{ you respond, and Galena nods once, emphatic. "Cut the bullshit Lucy, I've known you too long. There's something bad going down and I...
The 'Maybe' goes through and Galena looks at her friend closely... "Beatrice, I know something's wrong, spill," Galena says, and Beatrice's...
Xeno Washington, that's your name. Your skin is the color of a cloudy sky at midnight out in the country and your hair pulled back in a snarled...
Second MTM's comment.
I Second this motion: even chapters I write which are just bridges between other chapters have more content than this!
Well, they're both happening in the same mall with only one movie theater, so I'd be surprised if they didn't... ;)
Now let's see if we can get more than two people interested...
Hi, I just wanted to ask you something: Malls Are Big Places, especially ones like the one you depict: would you be willing to have there be...
Disagree. Any shmendric can publish their own story: but it takes something special to inspire others to add to a story, and the more people...
What do you want to do to try to alert her?
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