This is a personal opinion, but I'm not sure things necessarily need new names or entirely new words (even in a Fantasy setting), when they are...
You need to give people something to connect to. Is a destyn a terrifying predator, a supernatural entity, a type of person, a member of an...
The OP deleted the story and their account
Is there a specific thread you'd like feedback on? That's a pretty well established story.
This is almost the exact premise of "The Allure of Wanton Cove," a text game by Gatekeeper that he advertised on these forums. Not saying you took...
The things I love most in the world are eating out my mother and not using commas where they are necessary to change the meaning of a sentence.
My natural inclination in life and all things is to wing it and see what happens. But in writing I really do need to plan otherwise I hit writer's...
The thing you like writing the most is going to be the one that pushes your own specific combination of buttons. It's tailored to you...
A computer virus, in the bioengineering tanks. As I read it, the ship's crew are living and reproducing normally so it would only affect those in...
It could just be a virus left behind by the people on the dying planet as a final F U to those who escaped
If someone goes to your profile page, then looks at the chapters you've published, thay can see what tags are on each chapter. I have no idea how...
I didn't really address this point in my first post, but I should mention this since it's CHYOA: Any criticism is going to land much harder if it...
For some of the massive stories, there can be a huge variance in quality between authors. And once they get too large, story map starts to choke...
She could be a princess to a royal family that is deposed from the throne. She would not have to go anywhere for that to happen, it could take...
Separate names with a comma.
