I like the premise, I think it would benefit from some randomness. Wasn't there talk of adding a RNG to CHYOA a while back? Did that ever get...
Since it is an island, it could be entertaining if Kate tried to steal or rig a ship to sail away, only for merpeople or an intelligent tentacle...
To add on to what has been said, I write for some CYOA games. The biggest issue with this is that your writing has a tendency to lose forward...
The tagline for the story is "If you dont get it youre an idiot" so I think it's clearly a joke or somekind of statement. In either case I agree...
I always liked the scenes in Dogtown where Nicole Kidman's character had to drag around something heavy. Add an ENF component to that, so she has...
The Xenomorph was created as the physical manifestation of the fear of rape
I prefer the 1950s setting just because it would stand out more for me. A couple other aspect of the setting would be interesting. For one, the...
I could be persuaded. What did you have in mind?
I think the distinction is between imagining a horrible scenario that didn't happen vs. fetishizing one that actually did. I can see both sides of...
As I recall the movie, the characters do remember it and are aware of it at the time, which is a big part of the horror. The wife in that movie...
Vonnegut's 8 rules of writing say this: -Every sentence must do one of two things — reveal character or advance the action. -Start as close to the...
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