I It's alright. We won't be starting for a few days, anyway, so take all the time you need.
That genuinely surprised me :D Looks good so far.
Looks good to me.
All that's just to say that there's no problem with your character.
Putting sorcerers as a race isn't really true to the lore, but I thought it might help to simplify things. Basically, humans and elves (maybe...
Daltar smiles. "Very well. I look forward to serving under you." He bows, before taking a seat across from her. "Why don't we celebrate the...
Daltar is silent for a few moments, working out a compromise. "Very well, then. How about, instead of making me the leader of your fleet, you...
Daltar raises his hands. "Your majesty, do you believe that the captains and crews of those ships will betray you? If they are traitors, than it...
I prefer the appearance of the human woman as well, but they're both good.
"Conquering?" Daltar chuckles. "So, Naboo isn't the summit of your ambitions? Well, I can't say I'm fully against the idea, but I have...
I like both, and I'd accept either. Up to you.
Nothing I can spot. Looks good to me. :)
And with equipment, I'd say two points can be spent on one thing.
I'd say the second or third character would likely be the best fit. In this universe a goblin girl would probably be called a monster and killed...
[IMG] The Northern Kingdoms squabble amongst themselves, the dwarves and elves chafe under human oppression, any spark liable to flame up into a...
Daltar nods. "The death of the Emperor has left many people around the galaxy ambitious. They're forgetting their place, beginning to rise up...
Daltar follows the queen, showing no sign that he's noticed the blaster at all. "I'm no thief, your majesty. I'm not here to try and steal your...
"It might be better if we were to speak privately, majesty." Daltar looks up at the queen.
The cheek... Daltar nods. "Very well. See to it that my retinue's needs are seen to. That will be all." He walks into the throne room, bowing as...
"We'll see what's happening with the queen, and improvise." He follows the stormtrooper, entering the speeder.
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