I would keep it in the same story. Only downside I see is storymap becoming unwieldy
These are nice little horror stories. My favourites thus far have been Case of the Sharecropper's Daughter and Grandpa's Dirty Book,
I enjoyed how you wrote Rebeorca being trans in Age of the Orc.
Thank you! This was a fun adventure. I am certainly going to be reading the next one when it comes.
It was a nice story and long enough. Definitely fun to read.
I think ending here would feel bit abrupt straight after sexy action. I like what you have done with Bob in this story.
Yes, this is a choice for Yulia to make.
Being underwater might be less than optimal for melee strategy.
That really didn't go well. On the next round Yulia should remember Open Sesame to open the path for shots and spells like with Kraken. Halo was...
Would sinking to the bottom actually be bad? Presumably Yulia will be able to breathe underwater again, if she even actually needs to. As for the...
I agree, Emmie's plan looks good
Even if I might agree with more tension, I am enjoying this a lot. I don't know if you are consciously imitating Tolkien's style in The Hobbit...
In that case doing equipment swap seems smart here.
That sounds good. Worse interpretation would be all enemies Yulia did not defeat, either by losing or not fighting them.
That sounds good. we can go on, unless someone wants to go back and deal with Quincy and get Sally back before going on.
That was a turn to dark. At first you made me almost dislike Daleman, well written there. Then you made her likeable and now I'm waiting to see...
If we want to kill Quincy, I support that. He is making everything to annoy us. Still we can well see first what comes next.
I like the current balance. It works well and plot is moving forward at nice pace.
I think Missy sounds harmless enough. As to fighter, Talwa did well in the previous fight, so maybe let her continue.
So first we win three fights and get Sally back before thinking murderous thought, maybe?
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