This sounds good, but should we consider keeping one of the less impact oriented melee fighters in reserve to protect Yulia while she takes out...
At east you got one new reader.
Waiting until we know what we are against before making the final decision sounds even better.
Miss-Emmie's plan sounds good and mostly follows how Yulia's group has fought before. So we can continue with the panties buried at the bottom of...
I guess Yulia can dispose of the panties and we can move on.
OK, we can spend a moment gearing up properly.
I agree with Miss-Emmie that using The Blade of Envy is not something we should use. especially, if we can trade it for something useful later.
It sounds llike Yulia is not enthusiastic about raping the defeated. So maybe we should listen to her for once and not rape the defeated. Let them...
It was there, then it was no longer there, when things changed once more.
That sounds far more interesting to me than Bad Sex.
Also links and linking chapters mean that the number representing the route is not unique. We could well have both I.1.1.1.2.3.1.1.1 and 1.2.1 be...
As an idea I liked the doors, but after spending an evening trying to figure how many states the doors have, I just clicked the link in...
Well, it's a good thing that there is a lot more to this story than just the pitch. For example, enjoyable writing, coherent plot, a nice fantasy...
Endless Impossibilities: Chrissy (https://chyoa.com/story/Endless-Impossibilities%3A-Chrissy.52184) is already in existence. Go check it out.
Unique, recognizable titles, or, in big enough story, titles with route codes are essential to finding where I want to go in the story map....
this sounds like a fun idea. At least the first story was well done. As to the suggestions for other works, walter Scott's Ivanhoe is one I've...
Slave Tournament passes coherence test. So you can keep writing for another 850 chapters if you feel like that and I'm likely to keep reading. I...
50 chapters in a linear story is well on its way to novel length story if it's ongoing. Also a linear story that deep promises something rare...
I thought it's because you can plug quils out of either if you have to write something.
I'll admit that character pages are valuable as writer resource and thus they will be visible for everyone. I almost always check character pages...
Separate names with a comma.
