The lingering inhibitions holding Nami back had all but melted in the heat of passion. Her eyes closed as she moved to kiss Cha’ye, her tongue...
It's been such a good story! I do hope Lavorra's going to be ok in the end, but then, I also want to see what happens if she isn't...
“Well,” Nami murmurs, “they do say you need steady hands to be a doctor.” Her fingers slide between Cha’ye’s thighs, slowly moving to tease her...
Just what I was hoping for, with an even better extra twist! Great work!
“Please – please don’t call me that,” Nami whispered. Despite the pleasure she felt, the word mistress still stung her. “You’re wonderful, I –...
Nami barely had time to dimly realise what was still going on before the next wave of pleasure melted her reason once again. Nothing she’d...
“Nnnm…!” Nami grunted and gasped as she squirmed under Cha’ye’s skilful attentions. She managed to take in a deep breath, before it escaped her in...
The only response Nami could manage was an indistinct whimper. Her back arched, her body writhed, as the wave of pleasure built towards an...
Glad you're feeling better, I hope things are ok!
Trembling from head to toe, Nami bit her lip in an attempt to stifle her growing moans of passion. Stars, what would the others think if they...
Panting, Nami let herself lean back, opening her legs wide. One of her hands found its way to her own breast, playing with the nipple, while the...
True, it's just a good thing to pay attention to, as you say. That's probably fair - in intimate scenes, I guess I'd tend to try and pace these...
A soft moan escaped from Nami as she surrendered to the kiss, her eyes fluttering closed. She arched her back to push her chest towards Cha’ye, to...
Nami licked her lips, shivering with arousal, so close to leaning in to kiss. Her heart pounded in her chest as she let her hand slide up the side...
“No, it’s – ” Nami couldn’t help but laugh with Cha’ye, her body starting to feel warm as she relaxed more. “It’s Nami. Nami Azule.” Without...
These are very good for making back-and-forth dialogues flow, but I think the tricky part is when both Marcus and Samuel are mentioned in a...
There were tears in Nami’s eyes again – but tears of relief this time. She smiled apologetically, and let herself relax while her new friend...
Nami took a couple of deep breaths to steady herself, feeling that warm, maternal touch for just a little longer. This woman must have seen so...
Thank you both, this is great! I'm so happy that you like it! Any feedback at all is very helpful, at least I know I'm getting something right!...
The Valley of Mists now has an ending. I’d love to get any kind of feedback on how I’m doing, especially on what is better or worse about it...
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