Veiled belly dancer with heavy eye make-up?
Some extra line breaks in the middle of the dialogue in the first chapter?
Sounds promising. The focus on groups forming and going to the academy to be trained may be an interesting twist. Perhaps there's an audition or...
A link to your author page: https://chyoa.com/user/Genericc616
I'm likely to write a chapter following a reader's suggestion if it flows from the characters and scenes so far. Maybe a sequence if there's...
Sample characters, a mini scene or three, contributors' guidelines, what sorts of writing you like or don't, inspirations and themes. Enough to...
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Young man with a closeted "just with my best friend" relationship caught in the act by family or girlfriends and has to re-examine his identity...
The "switching places" seems like a good premise for some funny-interesting-awkward scenes. Twins separated at birth, one left in the magical...
Trying to lean into the declared themes (Dueling, magical attainment, Favors) as best I can here as Morgan and Fay start with their new House....
I took a look at Wanton Cove and found that on the Brave browser for Windows, the text contrast was not readable for me (basically white on...
Pleased to see an Amanda Clover banner on the desktop website for "Escape the Island of Eldritch Lust," available from Amazon.
I've been having a fun time with Boarbristle Academy. Morgan, lovestruck by Golondrina, has decided to switch Houses from Minerval to Leontes and...
Adding a link to make it easier to check out your story. https://chyoa.com/story/Tales-from-the-raider.13195
Cheers to the loyal writers. I've been stuck for a while about some of the "King's Own" plot directions -- maybe I need to think several choices...
I recommend Raymond Chandler's stories of the detective Philip Marlowe.
Small update on the larger guest list path for Roxy's party. Felipe, Mark, Samuel, Patrick and Gary are challenged to expose themselves to catch...
I'm presuming Roxy's party with Gary, Bernie and Lil? https://chyoa.com/chapter/%22So-how-do-these-parties-work-%22.308527 I was figuring that...
I just discovered Empowered, a webcomic featuring a superheroine with an easily lost super-suit. http://www.empoweredcomic.com/about...
Thanks! Chacun à son goût.
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