Yes, looks like Sisters only helps if you have Cunt-Licking already, then, so maybe not mention Sisters. Incest: The first time you get sweet xp...
I would say that page could be posted as-is. Was there something in particular you were looking for help with? The only rephrasings I might do...
I have been. Do you have a visual model for Jacqueline Prévert? Ah! Next thread. There she is!
And because I can't resist adding a link: http://chyoa.com/story/porn-competition-winner/cover
I have a top three at the moment. Decameron XXX by Beeble42. After a political swing toward a pro-sex party, Ivor Bigun gets to direct...
I like the notion of a scene. It would allow the rules to say, "During this scene, take +1/-1 to roll for ..." I like your desire moves. I had...
I've been enjoying your story updates.
I'd probably add that thread unchanged, other than grouping Tyrone's speech into a single paragraph. Without that, it looks like Lilija might be...
Thanks! I applied your recipe to fix a few threads in When The Cat's Away. Some others are still dangling, needing closer inspection. I ended...
The old "email to user" was a fairly effective feature. (And thanks much for answering my comment-questions).
So far, this has sent me delving into the SRDs of Apocalypse World, Dungeon World, and Monsterhearts. Early reflections give me cause to credit...
If the content is good, I would edit for grammar/usage and accept.
Only needs very light editing; some editors would accept as-is. Mostly I've spaced the dialogue into separate paragraphs. *It would be unusual...
Murakami, have you checked out Torg's Living Like Bonobos? It doesn't have the reality transformations/outsider point-of-view character that you...
Huge stories are harder to navigate. Reboots allow another editor to play by their own inspiration. I'd favor tagging and linking from the...
I favor accepting reboots AND pointing out the existing stories with encouragement to interact.
You're doing really well, for all your concerns about fluency. Here's my take on an edited version. ---- Lilija walked out of the JFK airport...
You've given us all some good stuff, and I'm happy to be supportive. In fact, you're both a good writer and have a distinctive voice (with Ivor's...
I've been enjoying the game aspect as a prompt to my writing. I've been tempted to start a spinoff story with variant rules and set-up.
Zack/Lisa is probably as good as any of the match-ups, and they already have an intimate tie. I expect that there will be multiple intense,...
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