I’m glad I got new glasses for this story. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Rider-%28Medusa%29---Finished-Route%2C-by-eval-vmare.1439378
about a year since this thread was created and holy hell the rate of improvement is insane. Even the hands are almost not abomination tier. I...
I usually start out by giving characters placeholder names with the intention of changing them later when their personality is more defined and I...
This went well, so since she likes Isalia that much we should have her help get the Bunny off. Once that done, we should still try to avoid Sally...
oh hey, I got the 1000 chapter award. I'm not sure that's a good thing
Oh yeah, heal Cherchiel already! I don't want to pay the bunny girl. It goes against my core values So, I'd say we trick her into a bondage...
Well, damn. Changing the POV might actually just be the thing that I need. The main issue I have with the scene is a sort of detachment to it,...
Oh yeah, that's always an option. The particular scene I am talking about is actually already a course correction, so I'm getting there it's just...
Lriiii you were supposed to seduce her! This is all your fault! I'm still against splitting up the group so as long as we can all follow Bunny...
the author actually posted a comment in https://chyoa.com/chapter/Tales-from-Rahowa%2C-by-IdealSimp.1424144 shedding a bit more light about the...
You know that feeling when you have to write a particular scene for plot progression. You know what you want out of it, it even sounds pretty good...
This one is definitely gone though. Since the author is gone too, he probably deleted it intentionally. But yeah he was fairly active until...
yeah, splitting up the group ain't happening. Assuming these things have similiar properties as the last robots that's just asking for trouble....
My apologies for the absolute monster this segment has turned out. Reading this will hopefully give you a small taste of the suffering Marcie and...
We probably shouldn't poke it but we can at least cast identify on it and see what we get. The fact that it is something organic in this higly...
shouldn't the cloak of turbulent wave have protected Yulia from that attack? So no repairing robots for our own robot death squad eh? Pity I...
that's as good a second income as any, they still need lots of money to found Marcie's company I definitely saw lesbian turned straight a few...
If I was more familiar with the franchise I sure I could put an appropriate BGM for this but alas Tomb Raider always alluded me....
forcing the issue can help, just open that fucking document and start typing, doesn't matter if it's garbage the biggest enemy is usually not a...
I probably shouldn't bring that up, but from the way it was worded I was under the impression that all the voices can make demands and Lemiel has...
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