Too short is definitely worse than too long.
You're right, I should've said "I", not "people". Using overly generalized language is one of my weaknesses. :P
Yeah, stop putting 2 spaces between your sentences, it's the 21st century. :P
I agree with insertnamehere. The Internet is a more fickle medium than a novel. People don't generally dive really deeply into a story, curled up...
I think it's just in the nature of episodic stories that the number of views goes down the deeper in the story people go, and consequently, so...
Haha, yeah, definitely a Goldilocks zone somewhere in between there.
Hey, congrats! :) If you'll take a piece of advice? You should add some tags to your story. It really helps to tell people what kind of thing...
It doesn't have to be that. Hierarchies are inevitable in even small groups, whether formal or informal. It's typical for the one man to be in...
248: Marry, Marry, Marry: An awful mixup at the city offices means Chuck is now married to not one, not two, but three women. While the...
Yes, you are definitely the only person on the planet who has issues with discipline and motivation. :P
Wow. I can barely keep a story going for 3 months. Nice job!
Your introduction is great. Dramatic, hinting repeatedly at a much larger universe, and giving just enough for the reader to go on. Honestly (and...
A thousand million apologies. I have committed honourable harakiri to atone for my misdeeds and to restore the reputation of my house. <3 :) The...
Well, it's Choose Your Own Adventure. By definition, that places the reader in (partial) control of the story, and the second person perspective...
This sounds... incredibly ambitious. You'd probably have to make extensive use of the game features of CHYOA, and it could end up needing you to...
I read the entire branch. You definitely have an interesting angle here, with Helen remembering what Aga-as-Helen did and it having an effect on...
Haha, basically! I figured I'd practice what I preached. :P
Separate names with a comma.
