Marcie and Gina will be the judge of that. Your story has a walking shark, so that already gives you a massive advantage.
Marcie’s enemy https://chyoa.com/chapter/Eventful%2C-you-are-ambushed%2C-by-RejectTed.1185187
One and three for me. I definitely can get behind the, you fucks gave me a bunch of favorites but not a single like, enjoy the story not getting...
Alright, feels like I should clarify, I am for trying to lure the Imp into the Illustone tunnel in order to better fight him. Beyond that I agree...
Your strategy is sound, my main issue is that we simply don't know how strong that thing is. In general Imps shouldn't be too powerful andrely on...
Shit! Fuck! Argghhh! God damnit! Stupid Albino Goblin! Alright, alright, I'm calm, I'm calm Before we engage in battle with this oversized bat,...
Ah that's a classic problem My way of handling info dumps has always been to make the reader want to know what it is before you give them the...
ah bloody hell here is the correct link: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Cratering.1098344 Definitely wasn't my first choice, I actually was...
Oh, for fucks sake, engin If you think I'm gonna wade through half a year's worth of chapters just to find this one hint then you are goddamn...
I mean, I didn't even looked at it as a riddle. I thought we where firmly still in the information gathering phase lol Hm, yeah I feel like at...
I suppose we go to that Dwarf Museum? Not much more to say here
Not too proud of this one. There is only so many times you can roast the same author before it gets stale....
Oh definitely I still laugh that a certain branch I wrote as an april fools joke garnered a substantial amount of likes. The writing on that one...
We are indeed still doing these. Uh, Fantasy Dynasty! Expect to be harshly compared to Alexandra.
Oh...something tells me an abortion won't be that easy this time around. Well, this certainly is starting to turn into a wild goose chase, but...
Hah, got it.
This one just ballooned, at least I cut out the skinwalker tangent. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Gates-of-Genesis-by-DKRouga.1177806
As everything else in that fucking Path of Dreams, the Old mind's a dick But we get some valuable intel out of this Liloth is definitely not a...
uncanny valley is indeed the direction I was thinking as well. Probably will go with that one then, thanks
is there a word for ludonarrative dissonance in non videogames? Like characters behaving slightly off?
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