I see no issues. Great character!
True, but Hera at this point has sworn never to rebel against Zeus, so she has her anger pointed in the right direction. It's a little hard to buy...
Still in the godly disguise, Vailar moves behind the woman and slides her arms around her waist. "Like my palace?" She giggles, kissing the girl's...
I would think maybe, if you're not going with an upgraded weapon or armor, maybe some elegant clothes or a perfume that makes him more charming to...
Sure - it's one of the largest cities in Greece, after all. as for flaws and equipment, I could give suggestions, but I'd rather not interfere in...
Polis is just where they're from - if you want to do some research and pick a place of significance you can, but you're fine to just pick a name...
I like that idea. Right.
I'd say the power to send people to Tartarus would be something they'd be able to do later on - it's a bit OP to be able to just send people to...
Loyalist Gods: [SPOILER] [SPOILER] [SPOILER] [SPOILER] Rebel Gods: [SPOILER] [SPOILER] [SPOILER] [SPOILER] [SPOILER] Non-Aligned...
"Whoops!" One of the troopers chuckles, his arms wrapping around her - his frame clearly broad and brawny even through the uniform. "Let's take...
She sees one of the soldiers undoing his gauntlets to free his hands. He easily dodges out of the way of her sword, reaching out to feel one of...
"Fine, fine, don't get your panties in a twist." Adam sighs dramatically. "Yes, this was at the Academy. She...She had white hair." He begins....
Finally, the fat man fills her asshole with his seed, slapping her ass as he leans back to sit down. The stormtroopers approach eagerly, seeing...
[SPOILER] Swooping back in, Isabia opens fire at the same time the trooper does. Her shot lands near the feet of the Imperial, shockwave sending...
The stormtroopers stare at her, as she glares at them with her head shoved against the wood of the desk. "Heh, not just scum - the worst of the...
Derricote chuckles, not pausing his rough fucking as he grabs his communicator. "Commander? Send in...what would you say you could handle, four?"...
[SPOILER] The layout of the palace's inner workings seems unusual and unlike those she's seen before. Try as she might, Tow can't identify where...
"Not with my cock in you." Derricote grips her breasts as he pounds her, his breath hot in her ear as he nibbles on her earlobe possessively....
[SPOILER] "What sea- oh no!" Vetrik clings tightly to her as Isbia performs a barrel roll, a rocket whizzing past her helmet. She returns fire at...
Looks really good. I think that's an interesting flaw - gives the opportunity for a lot of scenarios.
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