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  1. gscmar64

    Is this idea good? homeinvasion/ the corruption of a fbi againt and her family.

    Nice idea addition, i forgot to ask for an incest element. Not only would it help another perspective but you could turn it into a stand alone story' told to a psychiatrists through flashback segments!
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    Is this idea good? homeinvasion/ the corruption of a fbi againt and her family.

    I hope your feeling better kinkyboy. Sounds like the kind of story i love to read and can hardly wait to read it!
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    What is the purpose of down-votes?

    Most of what you said dingsdongs reverberated with me. I also would like to know why the thumbs down was given to a chapter especially when the thumbs up total is higher. I want to know what i did wrong of how to improve what i did. In a way i would like to see it mandatory to leave a comment...
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    Depth vs Number of Chapters

    I'm very guilty of writing linear stories with very little choices only because i tend to write on the fly and rarely map out what's going to happen next. There have been time when i go back to add a choice only if it's a logical option to include one! Of the stories i read i do prefer choices...
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    T.L.C.

    What about that didn't you like that dad did it with no warning or Jory retaliating?
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    Can't believed I've written over 500 chapters! many thanks to all who have read any of them!

    Can't believed I've written over 500 chapters! many thanks to all who have read any of them!
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    Blackmail

    For some reason i would like to see an immigration official to be blackmailed by human traffickers making it easier for them to get teen hookers into the country
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    Ye Olde Ren Faire

    Not a huge fan of photos myself but if you believe it will enhance the storytelling better than descriptive word then go picture crazy!
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    Ye Olde Ren Faire

    Finished and liked what I've read so far(4 chapters to date).Enjoying the slow build-up as I posted and can hardly wait for the main scenario to begin
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    Ye Olde Ren Faire story brain storm

    Sounds good to me
  11. gscmar64

    What lead you to Chyoa?

    I was searching for incest stories to read one night and Goggle suggested "A Tale of Three Sisters by TurinTurambar. After reading a few chapters i was hooked aadn thought i wouldn't mind giving a story of my own a try
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    Chapter identification

    Zelonkarac that's a good idea to encourage more writers to the story base here-reward them!
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    Ye Olde Ren Faire story brain storm

    Great idea but how could you forget the damsel in distress needing to be rescued by determined faire goers or the knight in shining armor equivalent? Maybe even have the faire attendees disappear into a realm connected too another dimension. Either way just post and i'll be reading it!
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    Jessica's Choices

    So i let my girlfriend read all the Jessica's saga (Love it!) She wondered if you ever considered doing the same story but with Jessica as the baddie to some other unfortunate person?
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    Bad Ends in Stories

    Personally i love to read the bad ending more than good ending,it's usually more fun getting to the bad ending.especially when you can visualize the ending actually happening in real life situations!
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    Getting to know the community

    Hello i'm gscar64,someone who found this site when searching for incest and non consent sex stories online to read when bored. After viewing stories by Torg (Archie: Awakening in Riverdale) and Shandy (The Perils Of Lisa) I was hooked. You can find my writing on ravishu.com . Here I'm the...
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    Paying the Movers

    I've loved the story right from the beginning and followed it religiously. Future jobs to consider,serving virgins at a nerd frat party,payment for dropping a police investigation into her business affairs,cake girl at a stag party and one of my personal favorite ones tour guide into the world...
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    Jessica's Choices

    I like the idea but i would like to see the girls armed with a simple weapon on a hunt of their own-get the guy that raped them to begin with or in Jessica's case everybody since you introduced her! Hell the girls can be paid if they kill their rapists that way they don't go defense mode immediately
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    Chapter identification

    Is it possible in the My Chapter section of our profiles that the chapters written could be broken down into say "For My Stories" and "Contributed to Other's Stories" ? I lost track of what stories I've contributes since i started contributing! I understand if it's not possible due to the amount...
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    T.L.C.

    I'm hoping to get some feedback on what i did right with this story. https://chyoa.com/story/T-L-C.9479 It's gotten more favorites than the entire total of my previous six stories combined. Would also like to get suggestion on what you would like to see in the story besides better spelling and...
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