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Hello all, It's been a while.... probably about three years actually since I've been properly active on the site and here because I've been working on new projects or trying to find ways to monetize my writing. I've gone from making my own app (several iterations), which started out really...

Hello all, Thank you for taking the time to read this. I along with an incredibly talented writer have begun writing a new story. The Lines We Cross. It is a story I’ve thought about for a very long time and now thanks to the amazing and beautiful (Saskia Darling) has become a reality...

Story : https://chyoa.com/story/Starlight-Shimmer.19308 Hello all, Whoring it out again for some feedback, what do people think of the pace so far? I'm enjoying telling the story and there is a bit more to come, especially from the political mess that will escalate but what about breaking the...

Hello all, Well I’m back again and back to writing a new story, because I obviously can’t have enough balls in the air. But if I didn’t at the very least get a start on this – it would never happen and just fester. So I’ve posted it with the intention of keeping it going but I guess I’ll see...

Hello all, I’m back with a new story and shamelessly looking for feedback. The new story is another Jessica’s Choices story, Another Life. The aim is to have this collection completely separate from the ones that came before, it’s an alternative life, a new beginning and somewhat slow at the...

So I’m thinking of exploring professor Trouchs’ back story, if you don’t know who he is; Trouch features in my Jessica’s Choices series and runs the Margaret Thatuals helping home. I liked my take on his hypnotism technique and enjoyed writing how Jessica felt like there was only one real...

Hello community, Looking for some assistance if possible, I'm trying to write a fight scene and have the choreography of the fight exact in my head but really struggling with the delivery. Examples: 1. Slowly walking behind the man, Lara grabbed at his ankles and brought him down towards...

Hello all, Jessica’s Choices – Red is my new story following a bit of an absence from writing anything and so far a week in it’s doing alright. https://chyoa.com/story/Jessica’s-Choices-–-Red.13226 (To my standards anyway) As yet there isn’t much in multiple choice but each chapter gives the...

Hello community, since writing albeit a very little amount in To Prove Superiority I've had the taste for writing / trying to write a big epic adventure but clearly Pov isn't my favourite perspective and found it very difficult. I want to make a story that encourages people to contribute and...

Thinking of writing a new story, moving away from Jessica I think, it starts as the below ish.... Couple of things to consider. The story will revolve around Sarah, trading, death, revenge in an apocalyptic world I don’t think there is enough urgency in the text and I’m wondering how I can try...

https://chyoa.com/story/Jessica’s-Choices---Collection.11698 Here I am again, shamelessly looking for feedback, second week almost gone by and so far so good I think for the newer chapters but a bit of a challenge fixing my old ones and amending the timeline where applicable. So yeah, here...

Here again to try and get a feel of how the community think the story is going :-/ which I suppose is more a collection of little stories as apposed to just one – hmmmm. I’ll come back to above, anyway here again to see if I can get any feedback or steer or perhaps if you liked any of the other...

Hello all, bit of a stretch to see if anyone has used a decent map generator or creator? I've had a look and the best I can come up with at the moment looks a bit shit, basically a copy then edited within Photoshop :-/ . If it helps the map is for...

I had an idea last night of an augmented reality game on your phone story, Quite a simple idea but essentially you the reader download an App for your smartphone and when pointed at anyone you see their naked form, on the app there are further downloads available like downloading whips, dildos...

So.....I've done it again and lost all sparks on my newest story for the moment, wondering if I could have some opinions on the below? Should I go with this one or just knock it on the head? Jessica’s Choices – Hunt the cunt The following material is for adults only. It depicts acts of...

Hello, thank you for having a look in this thread. Here is the link to the story https://chyoa.com/story/Jessica’s-choices-prison.9266 Firstly I would like to acknowledge the amount of views and likes that my story has achieved so far. I’ve created this to try and get a steer on how I think...

Hey everyone, thank you for taking the time to view this, I hope you can help. I feel like I want to go down a somewhat darker route with one of my branches, I want to include some sort of erotic horror, I’ve already set the scene up with the main character getting splattered with blood from...

Hello all, Link to the story https://chyoa.com/story/Ultimate-Surrender-federation.8554 firstly I would like to thank everyone that has viewed, liked and contributed so far to my newest story and I'm overwhelmed that it is story of the week. Secondly, I'm on the hunt for some help / feedback...

Hello Here is the link to the story http://chyoa.com/story/jessica-s-choices/cover Firstly I would like to acknowledge the sheer amount of views that my story has had so far, I never envisaged that amount. I’ve created this to try and get a steer on how I think and you all think my story is...