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Thank you to everybody who replied. I don't have something to say to everyone individually but just know I appreciate every response. Apparently I had more to ask about protagonist perspective than the balance between sexy and not-sexy. Oh well. From reading the advice here (and also other...

Thank you for the reply. I want to respond to two things you said but I couldn't figure out how to do the formatting properly so sorry for the awkward quoting job above haha. 1) You say you wonder if the plot aspects of your stories bore people. What makes you say this? Do you see less...

You're definitely right. Really, when I say "it's dark", it's... I dunno. It's hard to describe. It's high fantasy but with a lot of horror influence. If you've ever played TLOZ Majora's Mask, it reminds me of that personally. Majora's Mask is a kid's game but at the same time there's undead...

Ok, interesting. Off topic from the original theme of the thread: You said you want character building, are you at all interested in second person stories where "you" are the protagonist? I find it kind of difficult to write a compelling 2nd person protag even though that's my ideal for this...

Hello everyone. A few months ago I decided to start conceptualizing a very obviously erotic fantasy story which revolved around a growing group of women and a male protag in a dark fantasy world. The female characters were each written in essence to serve as a vehicle to explore a different...

Thank you, that's very helpful. I figured it would be something simple I just wasn't seeing.

Hello all, I apologize if this isn't the correct place for posting this. Basically, I'm wondering if there's a way I could include multiple variables in a single if Statement? For example, could I include a character's disposition {if CharacterDisposition > 0} AND whether or not that character...