Some feedback. English stuff aside since authors are not native speakers. Anyway, I recommend avoiding using names that are too similar. Unless...
That's kinda how life is. The better writers on this site aren't here just to write a quick jerk off smut. They are often here to experiment and...
What are your goals with this story? You could do some research on the actual issues plaguing Japan's birth rates and make a satirical commentary...
"Sweet lord!" Jackie exclaims as he slams his hands on the metallic safe. "We are rich, boys and girls!" <<------ Open the conversation how you...
I think at the end of the day doing something unorthodox in your writing COULD work and turn out great, IF you have a good baseline knowledge of...
Yea not sure why I accidentally wrote the FPP example in third XD, fixed.
POV switches are actually not as bad if you can write it naturally, the most important is having motive and consistency. If you are going to...
Characterization can be difficult since we tend to write characters similarly, a common sin of newbie writers is to have every character almost as...
Some feedback from a quick read-thru: The sex feels a little too rushed. To quote an excerpt from your chapter: "Her tits jiggle with every...
I don't have a very good command of the English language, so when I write I often fall on a few basic phrases and words, a sin in writing. I don't...
Well then in that case does making the Persona canon sexualized add to it in a way that you envision being useful? Does it achieve any goals that...
It also depends if you want to incorporate a level of believability to a story, or just want a fantasy to play out quickly. I mean if you have...
Yeah ikr. Its like those mid to rich people telling us poor folk that they could only afford last year's Porsche and not this years'. Meanwhile...
Most readers wouldn't interact with the story to leave a like, its an active decision that even if someone enjoys your story they wouldn't bother...
Wattpad, CHYOA and Literotica are all filled with beginner works with absolutely no writing experience but a shit load of badly written smut....
It's like jacking off. If you're going to cum in a five seconds you're not going to enjoy it. If you edge it longer and hold it in before the...
well I just published a story recently and there's 2006 views and only 6 likes. Suspicious it might be bots, the cadence of likes seem a bit too...
So I have read the rules and I can understand there are big NOs to depraved violent scenarios. I am writing a story based off the MC hunting...
Separate names with a comma.
