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This is a lot to take in, and I am honest grateful for that. I've actually been wanting a response like this, someone who would analyze my writing and help me improve on any imperfections. I appreciate any compliments I receive on my story, but finding criticism which hold merit and are aimed to...

I've been wanting to put myself out there and begin writing stories, publishing them and getting my work out there. It's my goal to be a good story teller, I have many stories in mind and have been addicted to sharing my work and improving on my writing. Trouble is, I don't know where or how...

For example share a character, chapter, scene or whatever it is you originally intended to add into your story but ultimately you decided to remove for reasons. I will start: The story of Monster Girls Chronicles was originally very linear, and was focused on one central character. It was...

I cannot say what makes a story popular, though my initial guess is if it's high likes you seek then decipher what the popular fetishes are and take over from there. Incest seems to be the dominant kink, then I would guess it would be some sort of genderswap fantasy or perhaps a harem-like...

I take my writing very personal, so when I approach a sex scene I do it if it feels natural, well paced, if the characters are developed, and if I am in the mood. Not sure if others write these way, but my method for writing a sex scene is to usually get into the mood for sex myself. I visualize...

What is Cuckold? I know what it is but I'm asking for your interpretation, it seems the popular view for this fetish is humiliation of a partner, typically male, along with a touch of femdom and sometimes an added impregnation to the mix for completion. I mean, cuckold can also be sweet and...

Hey everyone, M-Merry Christmas haha. I'm a bit nervous about this, I rarely get much feedback so I'm sort of hoping this helps a little bit. I was hoping to have some criticism on my story, Monster Girl Chronicles. https://chyoa.com/story/Monster-Girl-Chronicles.21210 More specifically, the...

[Monster Girls](https://chyoa.com/story/Monster-Girls.21210) will be on hold for an unspecified amount of time. Monster Girls is a play on the fantasy genre with a touch of character building and linear storytelling. It is a library containing multiple stories based on numerous different...

Just an honest approach, been having a dry spell with my story in terms of fan reaction so, here ya go! https://chyoa.com/story/Monster-Girls.21210 I would advertise it but it does it by itself in the intro chapter hehe

Very delighted to be working with you on this as well Brev :D As he said, linear for now but the future holds no boundaries on the possibilities! Check it out, give it a quick read see if it's your thing :)

Of course, seconded! :D

I have added so much more to Monster Girls since my last update/response, so please feel free to give it another glimpse if you have the time to spare. Any feedback would be welcomed, and if you feel so generous to leave likes or god willing become a follower, know that you are making a certain...

A couple of Chyoa veterans in this thread, I am so honored! :D Thanks a bunch for contributing again hehe, always a pleasure to make more friends here :^)

Find the silver lining in a bad spot and make the best of it, that's my way of thinking :^)

Wow <3 Beautiful written and explained perfectly, I can tell you are a good writer from that alone XD I empathize with you on a lot, with your goals and reasoning. Writing is a hobby of mine as well, in fact I would go further and claim it is a shared hobby we all have seeing how we are here...

Thanks everyone for pitching in and adding another voice to be heard and a story to cum with/recommend! I hope to see several more faces arrive but this post made so much more progress then I thought it did that I would be contempt if this was it haha :D Seriously, thank you guys you're all...

You are quite the interesting one, utilizing the website in a different way to enhance your story through a game mode. I need to ready your work someday to see how it goes, judging by how it has been received it looks like people love it :^)

The beauty of Chyoa I imagine, and being recommended so many good stories XD

Good, that was the point of this post hehe :^) I felt it was rather empty and needed some laugh, so I asked for a hangout. Been enjoying all the new faces and hearing so much history behind every writer around here! I'm glad you took a chance to contribute to this post, thank you for that :^)

Hey! X3 Don't you dare, I swear I will have a heart attack if my story gets bombed. At least give me enough time to prepare some bomb shelters, or tell my girls to keep calm and carry on. Seriously though, thank you for the mention Brev :^)