advice

New-ish author here and very new to the forums so if this is out of place I wanted to ask for some advice. I'm plugging along with my chapters and every time without fail I get to the follow up question and I just trip and fall at the hurdle. There's only one I would say I really nailed and...

Hey yall, I was wondering what your opinion is on posting short stories on chyoa. I recently wrote a 750 words story that did pretty well on literotica (750 word stories are an ongoing challenge over there), but absolutely bombed here. I thought it was too short to split up in multiple...

Recently read a thread on minors in stories of a non erotic role. I was refreshing myself on the rules and saw they were (and I quite understand why) exclusionary. One phrase is “a body height which is very unusual for an 18-year-old” and now thankfully it doesn’t say “a body height which is...

So, as indicated by the list of variables that I keep handy for writers, myself included, the first generated romanceable NPC happened to be generated polyamorous. I know very little about polycules, so I seek help from those who might know: Where is the line between interpersonal psychology...

Hello everyone! This has been an issue I've been thinking about and I just wanted to get the perspective of other authors who have had or overcome this issue. Due to the nature of my job, I only really have the free time to write a few months out of the year. Due to this, I usually write in...

Hello, looking for some feedback on a story idea I got over the weekend: Nicole works as an assistant to nerdy scientist Brian for a revolutionary experiment: creating a gateway to another dimension. Brian unfortunately decides to use it to achieve his life-long dream of having a hot warrior...

Good afternoon, colleagues and readers! Now I am writing a long story about the evolution of relationships in a couple (I take myself and my girlfriend as an image), when a man in a couple is the initiator in the transition from traditional family relationships (M + F) to the cuckold lifestyle...

Hi, I just made my account not too long ago, and there's a lot of stories to choose from. I hope to contribute someday soon, but all of my erotica is currently not interactive. I've published on another site before, but here, I don't know anyone or favorites to be geared towards reading as I...

I figured I would start a thread of helpful advice for aspiring writers. I’ve been writing ever since I was young. I’ve always had an interest for creative writing. I published my first story (fanfiction) when I was about 11 or 12. And ever since I’ve delved in many genres, and obviously have...

Hey everyone, I've been updated my story "Possession Process" on a semi regular basis, at least twice a month. I often see on this forum that what matters more than views and likes is comments, but as it stands now I haven't received any comments or chapter to review. I was curious how other...

Hi, from time to time I've been updating and writing a story I felt connected to, but I have a feeling it's not the best it can be, some of it due to what I feel my cumbersome writing style and some of it since I sometimes feel some of the chapters are forced. the story is World's greatest...

So after giving it a go on writing my first story on chyoa and feeling I can do better with the skills I have required, I decided to jump to a new opportunity and explore a brand new story open and ripe with opportunities! Problem is I’ve zero feedback and support towards it XD I’ve given my...

Hey just looking to get any feedback and/or advice on my recent story HSOWAF as have not received too many comments to help me make sure I'm sailing in the right direction. I'm just about to start introducing conditional chapters which I have never played around with before if anyone has any...

I'm not entirely sure if this is the right place to ask this question, but I've been all over the forum and I couldn't really find anything about what "linking chapters" in your story does. Also, is there any possible way to have chapters meet up to the same outcome without copying a chapter...

Hey all. Just started writing on here about a week ago and did six chapters in "The Developer's Room" then decided to start my own story. It's only two chapters deep, but I tend to write long ass chapters. I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me! Thanks! Link -...