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  1. Deathcon
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    Deathcon's Sex Stories

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.567756 https://chyoa.com/story/Real-Waifus-Bang-You-CYOA.25075 Tell me how you feel about them. Note: I...
    Thread by: Deathcon, Mar 20, 2020, 5 replies, in forum: Story Feedback
  2. Debbuger
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    Story advice and criticism request (for those who have time to spare)

    Hi, from time to time I've been updating and writing a story I felt connected to, but I have a feeling it's not the best it can be, some of it due...
    Thread by: Debbuger, Jul 11, 2019, 1 replies, in forum: Authors' Hangout
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