Hi, all, this is the story feedback thread for My Wife, His Girlfriend which you can read here:
https://chyoa.com/story/My-Wife%2C-His-Girlfriend.32252
I'd like to hear what you all think of it. Any general thoughts, ideas on how it could be improved or suggestions of where you want the story...
Welcome to the forum page for my story, Godawful Gothic Girlfriend. Here you can see updates on the where the story will be going and where anyone can post ideas, thoughts, or anything else they have to say about the story. If you've read anything else I've written you've no doubt noticed the...