Updates: Finally figured out how to word the credit to Tapdancingfish for the original story this work is based on. Also finally hit the 50 chapter mark (well, less than that if you discount the "Author Commentary/Announcement" chapters). On the "Leggings surprise butt-sex route," I finally figured out how to continue onward and managed to get through the sex scene (3 to 4 pages of it), and set up a hook that could lead to either a potential game over or an eventual merging back into the main route... but I still need some work on it. Unfortunately, I am now fresh out of ideas on how to implement it. On the one hand, I really need to insert a game over somewhere soon... as the prologue is supposed to be a sort of tutorial to get readers familar with the mechanics and characters. Neglecting to add a game over would be skimping out on a major game function. On the other hand, the sex scene should potentially be able to funnel back into the main route... though I am not sure how to make sure it and the other routes have enough in common to where I don't need to write entire swaths of basically duplicate chapters. Any ideas or suggestions? I haven't gotten very many comments recently.
