Adventure's of the Wanting Victim

SmutMaster

SmutMaster

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So a crazy idea I had in my head for a little while now has finally made its way on paper...um, screen. Typed. Whatever.
Any questions, comments, concerns about my new baby of a story should go here. I have a few chapters already typed up, so I'll have them rolling out at the start of the new week and we'll see how far I can take this.

Edit: Should MAAAYBE put a link to the story in, just in case.
https://chyoa.com/story/Adventures-of-the-Wanting-Victim.15611
 
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Nemo of Utopia said:
I have nothing to say.
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That's...great? I mean, I wasn't expecting much in the way of anyone posting, I'd have been happy with any feedback, but...it just seems odd to go out of your way to post just to say you have nothing to say. Have you read it? I'd appreciate any feedback or suggestions.
 
You don't want feedback from Nemo for this kind of story! ;)

I read what you posted so far, and it's too hardcore for me.
I would have found it more appealing, if Maria was less extreme in her adventures.
 
dingsdongs said:
You don't want feedback from Nemo for this kind of story! ;)

I read what you posted so far, and it's too hardcore for me.
I would have found it more appealing, if Maria was less extreme in her adventures.
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I can undersrand that perfectly. It's not for everyone, but I'm the kind of guy that gets frustrated when a story promises corruption, exhibitionism and other extreme stuff and takes forever (to me, anyway) to get to it. I know it' not for everyone, so I don't expect a lot of views in the same vein as other popular stories.

I suppose the reason why I even bothered to reply at all is cause I don't go aroynd to other stories that I think go too slow saying "I have nothing to say"
 
That was my way of saying that, if I said anything else, I'd probably get perma-baned... I've made it my mission to never let a call for comments go totally un-answered again on these forums, but trust me when I say:

dingsdongs said:
You don't want feedback from Nemo for this kind of story! ;)
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...dingsdongs is 100% correct here.
 
Nemo of Utopia said:
That was my way of saying that, if I said anything else, I'd probably get perma-baned... I've made it my mission to never let a call for comments go totally un-answered again on these forums, but trust me when I say:



...dingsdongs is 100% correct here.
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Oh...well, okay, if you say so.
 
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