Asian Persuasion

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by daciasdesire, Apr 11, 2018.

  1. daciasdesire

    daciasdesire Really Experienced

    Just a little brag that I'm super excited that my story Asian Persuasion has just brought up its 100th deep chapter! Its now in some rare company with 46 other stories that are 100 deep. I've still got plenty of ideas for whats to come still. Heres to 200 now!
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Congrats!
     
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  3. daciasdesire

    daciasdesire Really Experienced

    Closing in on a couple of very important milestones.

    50 likes away from 4000 likes!
    10 chapters away from 200 deep!
     
  4. lamancha

    lamancha Virgin

    thanks to everyone reading along
     
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  5. daciasdesire

    daciasdesire Really Experienced

    Asian Persuasion becomes the 79th (I think) story to cross over the 5000 like mark :)
     
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  6. lamancha

    lamancha Virgin

    terribly proud and appreciative It's great working on your story with you Dacia
     
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  7. daciasdesire

    daciasdesire Really Experienced

    Right back at you! We make quite the team
     
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  8. lamancha

    lamancha Virgin

    Congratulations on this story! we've reached 1 million views and Im so happy to have done this with you.
     
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  9. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    CurvyLinesEverywhere Really Experienced

    I just discovered this story, and I really like the tone and the pacing so far.

    The sheer diversity of the cast is fun, too. (Do you really travel this much? If so, I'm jealous. :p If not, I'm impressed at your research.)

    I would love to see a followup story where each route is you meeting up with one of the girls from the first story in their country for a second date where they show you the sights and a good time. I'm not sure how to put this into words, but you make them feel like really different people, even from the short descriptions in the first links, and it kind of makes me want to see what kind of shenanigans they'd each get up to if they had the home court advantage. :D
     
  10. daciasdesire

    daciasdesire Really Experienced

    Thank you CurvyLines! I can't say I've been to all of these places. Ive travelled a lot through Asia and was even born there, although I moved when I was still very young. Your idea for a follow up story does sound like it would be a lot of fun. I have some vague plans for the MC to head to one of the girl's home countries at some point. That could be a fair time away from getting written though. I'm really glad you have been enjoying it though