Best Friend's Bachelorette Party

gene.sis

gene.sis

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Just another random thought I won't work on.
EDIT: I'm currently working on implementing this concept with a couple of other authors. See the rest of the thread for details.

Could be implemented as a game mode story with easy mechanics.


The male protagonist gets invited to his best friend's bachelorette party.

Knowing, that he would be the only guy, he argues that it is a girls' thing, telling his friend that he doesn't want to join.
But his best friends insist on it and tells him about one or two of her friends who might be interested in dating him, even giving him free rein for a one night stand.

As the bride-to-be gets to the party with her best friend, the others (maybe four or five girls) aren't overly excited and he hears complaints that they don't need a chaperon.
At first, he feels like the fifth wheel but once the girls get tipsy, some of them start flirting with him and he might get the chance to have some fun.
There could be a self-conscious, chubby girl who would give him a blowjob at the bathroom. She would like to get fucked but fears rejection and wouldn't ask him.
If he doesn't do anything with her, he could get in touch with a rather dominant woman, who would let him lick her pussy. If he waits too long, she would push him down, roll a condom over his cock and fuck him in cowgirl. If he stops licking, she might beg for him to continue but wouldn't mind getting fucked.
If he doesn't want to go down on her, he would meet two bridesmaids in the kitchen who are quite tipsy and up for a threesome.

Later that evening it's time for the male stripper.
As he is late, the girl who booked him tries to call him just to find out that he's in hospital after spraining his ankle.

"What is a bachelorette party without a male stripper?" the girls agree before one of them (depending on his earlier decisions) suggests that the protagonist could strip for the bride.
Both, the protagonist and the bride, disagree but the girls start chanting until they finally give in on the condition that he won't strip naked.
A chair, the bride, music... then he starts undressing and gives his best friend a more or less sexy lap dance... the girls cheer and screech and as he only wears his boxer shorts, they scream and chant to see him naked, some of them tugging at his underwear.
"They won't stop until they have what they want...," his best friend whispers at him, "Just cover your crotch and stay like that for a second before getting dressed."
He does it but as his boxers are on the floor, the girls grab his clothes and take them away.
Depending on his earlier decisions, they could then ask him to do something sexual like
- sex with the chubby girl -> kiss the bride
- sex with the dominant -> go down on some girls or the bride
- threesome -> show his hard cock (the girls would help to make him hard
Either way, he would get erect and the girls have fun touching him and alternate in sucking his cock before they try to persuade the bride to have sex with him as it is her last chance before being married. Tipsy and aroused, she might give in feebly.
Then, the protagonist could decide if he wants to do his best friend, risking to ruin a wedding.
Alternatively, he could quickly go for another girl and have sex with her in front of the others.
 
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OMG! This is a great idea! I'd take it on myself but im up to my eyeballs already with Inside the Game, and doing this RIGHT would involve YEARS of writing and revising in draft mode before ultimately publishing as a largely completed work, and I already have one story like that...
 
Nemo of Utopia said:
OMG! This is a great idea! I'd take it on myself but im up to my eyeballs already with Inside the Game, and doing this RIGHT would involve YEARS of writing and revising in draft mode before ultimately publishing as a largely completed work, and I already have one story like that...
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Um... maybe 30k words total...
If done as a game story, it would probably need around 5k words before publishing. (Basically the introduction and the first chance to have sex.)
Game mode mechanics would be quite simple for that, so I think there is no need for much revising.
 
Well SURE, if you don't want to explore the concept to its limits and push it out the door half-finished and without a good peer review, I guess you could do it that way, but where's the pride? The Ambition? The sense of Craftsmanship? You don't do a half-assed job on a rough diamond of three-hundred carats like THIS: you measure, you examine, you scan, and calculate to the point that when the first cut comes off perfect you faint dead away from the stress: but when you're finally done, what you end up with is THIS:

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(Well, the erotic literature equivalent anyway...)
 
Nemo of Utopia said:
but where's the pride? The Ambition? The sense of Craftsmanship?
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:D
as I said... a random thought. I have a lot of ideas which are going around in my head, growing over the months and years... I keep small short notes and add some thoughts once in a while.

There might be some great ideas but the sad thing is, if nobody uses them, they won't be anything. They will stay a rough diamond, not developing just a little bit, not getting the attention they could get.
So it could be of advantage to rather give it a good start and make it excellent afterward than not letting it see the light at all.

(Though I guess I'd prefer rubies ;))
 
I like the thought of doing this in game mode, and initial decisions influence if you end up having sex with your best friend in the end.

Would need some thinking abour interesting, enticing decisions, which are not too obvious and each bringing their own little rewards.
 
I think this is a terrific story idea and I volunteer to write an introduction for it - I don't want the story itself on my plate, as I prefer to be the editor of just one active story at a time, but I'm happy to write up an intro and PM it to gene.sis (and as far as I'm concerned, you then could use all, some, or none of what I write).
 
It's a great idea but I agree with Nemo that it should be well worked on, I think it would be a shame to have such a good idea and then not fully explore it. I also agree the Game Mode would probably be the best way to write it.

You can increase the number of other girls, perhaps add in activities they are doing earlier on in the day (giving the potential for relationship building as well as encounters with the girls) such as time at a spa, a treasure hunt, dancing (pole dancing?) classes, nude life modelling, 'seduction' classes, perhaps then a bar crawl before heading back to the rented out house (with such amenities as a hot tub). Then depending on what events have been (less chance for a sexual encounter in the larger group activities but these could also be ones which have got the girls aroused) taking place influences reactions. I'd even be inclined to make a weekend of it, with them having the first nights antics in the house followed by the activities the next day and the second night and following morning before they leave.

Something else to consider, which I think would be good, would be the bride being unaware of what the activities are and only insisting almost last minute that the organisers invite him along. Thus having a very female focused event, him still being almost unknown to most of the other women. Because if he's her best friend it stands to reason that at least some of her friends will be aware of him (engagement parties and the like). Thus some of the girls could already be planning to have a roll in the hay with him, others could dislike him and others that have practically never met him, and likewise he can have opinions on some of them.

You've then got the potential of building the relations with the other women, as well as trying to keep his sexual antics on the down low (and the consequences if the others find out) and that is even before we get to the rom-com staple of him examining his relationship with his best friend.

And rubies still have to be cut for clarity ;)
 
Um... as initially stated, this was just a random idea, so I'm somewhat fascinated by the reactions...

Well... if some of you want to work on this story concept... I'd
- create/manage the story
- edit additions
- do game mode related stuff
- piece together text parts and if statements
- contribute to ideas
- discuss ideas
- do/help planning
- do/help balancing
(so I probably wouldn't write much content except adding some lines while editing)


Erudite said:
You can increase the number of other girls,
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This could be somewhat difficult as every additional girl would blow up the effort by maybe 30 percent.

Erudite said:
perhaps add in activities they are doing earlier on in the day (giving the potential for relationship building as well as encounters with the girls) such as time at a spa, a treasure hunt, dancing (pole dancing?) classes, nude life modelling, 'seduction' classes, perhaps then a bar crawl before heading back to the rented out house (with such amenities as a hot tub).
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These are all great ideas!

Erudite said:
I'd even be inclined to make a weekend of it
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Tempting, though the longer it is the more work... though tempting ^^

Erudite said:
Something else to consider, which I think would be good, would be the bride being unaware of what the activities are and only insisting almost last minute that the organisers invite him along. Thus having a very female focused event
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Of course ^^

Erudite said:
him still being almost unknown to most of the other women.
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Yes, something like that... the other girls could mainly be workmates while the guy is the best friend from her youth...

Erudite said:
And rubies still have to be cut for clarity ;)
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So... who wants to cut a ruby or diamond... or something in-between? ^^
 
Nemo of Utopia said:
As long as we can agree to keep non-con and incest out of it, I'd love to help with this project!
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Um... there wouldn't be much room for incest at all O.o

Non-con shouldn't be an issue in general...
I mean, the protagonist/reader would decide what he wants to do... though it might be slightly touched if the protagonist is tipsy in the clutch of the girls.
 
gene.sis said:
This could be somewhat difficult as every additional girl would blow up the effort by maybe 30 percent.
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I have observed that seven characters seems to be a fairly ideal number for stories like this, where the story is about a group of people with no other characters having a significant role. Seven allows for sufficient interactions and opportunities, while still making it so everyone can have "screen time". In this case, the male protagonist wouldn't necessarily count as one of the seven; being a stand-in for the reader (even if the story is not written in second-person). He would have to be something of a "nothing" character by design; make him too interesting, with too many personality quirks, and fewer readers will be able to identify with him. So, apart from him, these are the character choices that I imagine:

(1) The Bride (obviously)
(2) The Maid of Honor (Bride's older sister)
(3) The Best Female Friend (someone who the protagonist knows well)
(4) The Groom's Sister (just turned 18, thrilled to be at her first REAL party, and ready to take her fake ID out on the town)
(5) The College Roommate (since roommates are randomly assigned, this could be someone of very different personality & background than the Bride)
(6) The Work Friend (she doesn't know anyone at the party except the Bride)
(7) The Lesbian Friend (because every CHYOA story should have lesbians)

Other characters outside the main group who are encountered at some point in the story might include:

- Strippers, naturally; they could even be female due to a screw-up at the agency
- The bride's thirtysomething aunt, recently divorced and horny
- The limousine driver, a hot woman in her late 20s who just got left at the altar, so she's jaded and angry, but also ready to do something kind of crazy.
- The jealous ex-girlfriend of the groom, who tries to sabotage the party
- The socially awkward next-door-neighbor girl, who the bride invited because her mother talked her into it ("she never gets invited to any parties, the poor thing...")
 
Start small and expand.

Game mode is excellent to start with the path of 3-4 girls, establish the plot and the structure, maybe have some other girls appear and then flesh them out when you have a functioning story.

If you start with too many choices at once, you risk getting bogged down.

I'd be happy to contribute here.
 
Javalar said:
start with the path of 3-4 girls
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Erudite said:
make a weekend of it
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These two could work nicely together as not all girl can't stay the whole weekend or can just turn up the next morning or noon at the location.

JoeSte91 said:
Aaaaaaand there's your incest.
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yeah... actually... sometimes you need another pair of eyes to see the obvious...
But I don't think that it is necessary.

If there should really be relatives, the incest could be avoided. It could even make up for sexy situations. If a girl has to do a dare to kiss or lick her relative, it could lead to something like "I'd rather suck his cock than [dare]" - "Sure... then go on..."`

In general, I don't think there is the need for relatives.
The absent of them could also lead to fewer inhibitions as there wouldn't be someone supposed to be a chaperone. (Well... I guess there aren't many inhibitions either way)
So I'd rather go for friends only... (or do you think that it is uncommon?)


Well... I think this might be better done through group conversation to avoid more spoilers...

So... if you want to be added, just let me know.
 
One could do this story with no one being related, but that's just not usually what wedding parties are like; weddings are inherently family events. There doesn't have to be incest just because two or more of the characters are related, they simply don't have sex with each other (you'd want to spell this out in the rules for contributing, of course). Having the bride's older sister in the story creates some tension and provides an interesting potential sex partner for the protagonist; perhaps she's always dismissed him as "just a kid" but now she suddenly sees him in a new light...
 
Xenolan said:
One could do this story with no one being related, but that's just not usually what wedding parties are like; weddings are inherently family events.
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I agree. Even if one were to go down the route of making her an only child, I would suggest that the Mother of the Bride should be a vital addition. And really, as soon as you introduce a mother or a sister, there's going to be someone out there who's going to want to write a scene where they kiss or the MC has a threesome with them.

Obviously you can set it out in the rules and moderate the story to keep it out. As a way of avoiding it, I quite like this idea:

gene.sis said:
If there should really be relatives, the incest could be avoided. It could even make up for sexy situations. If a girl has to do a dare to kiss or lick her relative, it could lead to something like "I'd rather suck his cock than [dare]" - "Sure... then go on..."
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This works well to sidestep the incest while also redirecting the action back to the MC.

gene.sis said:
So... if you want to be added, just let me know.
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I'm currently focused on a plot that I'm doing over on At the Cabin but this does sound like something I might contribute to in the future. I look forward to seeing what you all come up with until then.
 
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