Caught By Our Babysitter

[Torg]

I've started editing threads to make them all first person, past tense. "I watched her intently. She pinched her nipples." not "You watch her intently. She pinches her nipples."

I'm lucky that there aren't very many threads ... which I'm also starting to remedy. I've added threads for the first time in a long time.

 

[Zingiber]

And the link: Caught By Our Babysitter

 

[Torg]

Wow, apparently, this story struck a nerve, because my new threads already have 229 and 111 views in 2-3 days, and the story as a whole has 5000 more views than last week.