okay, I started writing new chapter last night. Will hopefully get some posts up tonight. I figured out the story arc for the new ranger and Alex, not planned to be anything super steamy, just a fun side story. It will lead to the introduction of some other characters who can interact with the group
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DarkFriday1408
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Hey there,
I was wondering if you have abandoned this story or if you have just taken a break from writing? It's a really good story and it would be a shame to see it disappear.
Good luck and happy writing.
I was wondering if you have abandoned this story or if you have just taken a break from writing? It's a really good story and it would be a shame to see it disappear.
Good luck and happy writing.
Since wednesday been a writing machine. started with the muse hitting me and writing up a flashback scene describing how Alex and Makayla met, then a really good scene with Bianca. all scenes written up will post them as i edit them
re Bianca, I finally found what i was going for with her, so i'm going to re-read all of her old scenes and may make some minor changes. so look for those edited scenes first
re Bianca, I finally found what i was going for with her, so i'm going to re-read all of her old scenes and may make some minor changes. so look for those edited scenes first
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Do not read until you have read the new chapters
I want to talk about Bianca for a bit. I was really stuck for a long time on how the scene with Pitt would go. How far it would go and so on. It was not my intention for them to have sex, But at one point considered them going pretty far before stopping. It bugged me that she had these stops and starts with Brian, which is why I edited the second one to have her stop it faster. So my original hook going into this scene was "If you are going to kiss me, don't you dare pull away from me and say we can't do this" but i was struggling. Plus I had to figure out how it would fit into my future plans.
Writing the makayla/alex scenes got the creativity going and I finally found the right inspiration for the scene. In the tv show "Skins" UK version. There's a teacher that attempts to fool around with a student and in a conversation after she states 'you were supposed to stay unattainable" and then I had my scene. Bianca was always supposed to have this turn and find her strength, but it was originally going to happen a day later. She is going to be on a rampage a bit before her and Brian finally come get together. I think I deleted it from the scene, but I originally compared her to an injured cornered animal that is lashing out at everything that threatens her
Do not read until you have read the new chapters
I want to talk about Bianca for a bit. I was really stuck for a long time on how the scene with Pitt would go. How far it would go and so on. It was not my intention for them to have sex, But at one point considered them going pretty far before stopping. It bugged me that she had these stops and starts with Brian, which is why I edited the second one to have her stop it faster. So my original hook going into this scene was "If you are going to kiss me, don't you dare pull away from me and say we can't do this" but i was struggling. Plus I had to figure out how it would fit into my future plans.
Writing the makayla/alex scenes got the creativity going and I finally found the right inspiration for the scene. In the tv show "Skins" UK version. There's a teacher that attempts to fool around with a student and in a conversation after she states 'you were supposed to stay unattainable" and then I had my scene. Bianca was always supposed to have this turn and find her strength, but it was originally going to happen a day later. She is going to be on a rampage a bit before her and Brian finally come get together. I think I deleted it from the scene, but I originally compared her to an injured cornered animal that is lashing out at everything that threatens her
hey guys, been a busy summer for me and honestly haven't even thought about the stories for quite a while. going to try and re-read from the beginning and get my brain back into it. I also haven't reading much. I've checked into the site to see which stories have been updated, but people seemed to be taking the stories in directions that didn't interest me so that hasn't helped. I will check back into those stories again as well.
DarkFriday1408
Experienced
Hey there,
Welcome back and happy re-reading. I hope that you will manage to find your inspiration again and that you will have the time and will to continue developing and finishing your stories.
Good luck and happy reading and writing.
