Ultrasound7
Experienced
I have been struck to finally get the ball rolling with this story and wouldn't mind some feedback and some suggestions with my work.
Niether would I object to reviewing other peoples ideas and plots for thier own threads that they may wish to make which is part of the stories design.
Now as for mine, well the gist of it is that it mixes also of material and character and mix it up to be its own universe. While some thing are radically different, some are the same.
For Example Koro Zor-El, aka Lord Doomsday of Apokalips, is a genderbent of Kara Zor-El aka Supergirl and his cousin on Earth Kala El is Kal El genderbent in case it wasn't so obvious.
Now his general plot is to take over the galaxy with a combination of brute force, subterfuge and seduction. Starting with turning the Truce with New Genesis into a full alliance, where he'll begin his new legislation of the universal political marriage. Allowing him to marry Alien Queens/princess even if the female in question is already married, as a matter of compensation and practice of unity and equality, the other husband in question is able to have any of his other women.
He does have an extensive list of worlds and wives to add to his collection such as Tamaran, Zamaron, Thanagar and such. Though he will come into conflict not just from the alien empires and competitors such as Mongol and the Reach, he is aware he has to deal with all the Lantern Corp.
Meanwhile on earth, the world is filled with danger and exitment Superwoman and her husband Lex Luthor and the rest of the Justice Legends deal natural disasters and the forces of Owlman and his Cabal who has to work to maintain his power or just enjoy the fruits of his labors.
Meanwhile the King Aquaman of Atlantis ans his newlywed wife Queen Wonder Woman are at war within Animal Kingdom led by Grodd and Circe, the world at large unaware ofnthe fax this is in fair a was between gods and nature.
Niether would I object to reviewing other peoples ideas and plots for thier own threads that they may wish to make which is part of the stories design.
Now as for mine, well the gist of it is that it mixes also of material and character and mix it up to be its own universe. While some thing are radically different, some are the same.
For Example Koro Zor-El, aka Lord Doomsday of Apokalips, is a genderbent of Kara Zor-El aka Supergirl and his cousin on Earth Kala El is Kal El genderbent in case it wasn't so obvious.
Now his general plot is to take over the galaxy with a combination of brute force, subterfuge and seduction. Starting with turning the Truce with New Genesis into a full alliance, where he'll begin his new legislation of the universal political marriage. Allowing him to marry Alien Queens/princess even if the female in question is already married, as a matter of compensation and practice of unity and equality, the other husband in question is able to have any of his other women.
He does have an extensive list of worlds and wives to add to his collection such as Tamaran, Zamaron, Thanagar and such. Though he will come into conflict not just from the alien empires and competitors such as Mongol and the Reach, he is aware he has to deal with all the Lantern Corp.
Meanwhile on earth, the world is filled with danger and exitment Superwoman and her husband Lex Luthor and the rest of the Justice Legends deal natural disasters and the forces of Owlman and his Cabal who has to work to maintain his power or just enjoy the fruits of his labors.
Meanwhile the King Aquaman of Atlantis ans his newlywed wife Queen Wonder Woman are at war within Animal Kingdom led by Grodd and Circe, the world at large unaware ofnthe fax this is in fair a was between gods and nature.