Demonic Incursion

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Demonic Incursion

Would like a bit of user feedback on my story. Do you like it or do you hate it? Do you want to see something particular happen? Want the story to go in a particular direction? If you see an error or a spelling mistake that's driving you wild, post it here and let me know.

I just want to improve your experience as a reader.

Don't be afraid post today.
 
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My bad, knew I had forgotten something. I have now added it in the first thread.
 
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