DOOMED

[Zeebop]

https://chyoa.com/story/DOOMED.63445

So, yeah. New fanfic story. This one is going to be slower-paced and probably less branching than Lois Lane's Night Out, but I'm hoping that by not jumping straight into sex and focusing more on corruption than transformation it'll end up being better quality. Playing with some ideas for the initial branches:

Branch Ideas

X1 - Mysterio - Porn of the Invisible Woman appears on the internet
X10 - Leak Sue's early modeling photos
X100 - Sue Admits The Photos are of her
X1000 - Mae Is A Pornstar
X10000 - Pornstar's home
X100000 - Tess Tempest is nude
X1000000 - Tess Tempest Wants Sue Storm's Clothes
X10000000 - Striptease
100000000 - Sue Is Naked, Surrounded By Her Family - And Has A Lot of Explaining To Do
01000000000 - Sue Makes Up An Excuse - But It's All An Illusion
01000000001 - Sue Tells Them Everything
0100000001 - Sue Is Naked, Alone - And The Envelope Is Missing
X10000001 - Sue Lets Mae Strip her
0100000010 - With Her Teeth
0100000011 - With A Pair of Scissors
010000002 - Sue Turns Her Clothes Invisible
X1000001 - Tess Gives Them To Sue For Free...Along With Copies of Her Porn
X10000010 - Sue Hides The Porn From Her Family
0100000100 - Sue Watches The Porn. Just Once.
0100000101 - Sue Plays With The Dildo. Just Once.
X10000011 - Get Distracted By An Emergency And Leave The Porn In Her Bedroom
010000012 - Sue Gifts The Porn To A Friend
X1000002 - Tess Tempest Wants Sue (Indecent Proposal)
010000020 - Reed Richard's Sex Tape
010000021 - Nude Photos of Reed...and Another Woman
X100001 - Tess Tempest is nude...and dead
01000010 - Call Her Lawyer - Jennifer Walters, AKA She-Hulk
01000011 - Call A Private Detective - Jessica Jones
0100002 - Tess Tempest is wearing a Fantastic Four uniform
01000020 - Tess Tempest Fucked Johnny Storm
01000021 - Tess Tempest Fucked Flatman
X10001 - Pornstar studio
0100010 - Blowbang
0100011 - Cunnilingus Instructional Video
X10002 - At a club
0100020 - Sexy
01000200 - It Feels A Lot Like A Date
01000201 - Sue Storm Is Uncomfortable With The Open Sexuality of the Club
0100021 - Furry
010003 - Sue Storm Invites Mae to the Baxter Building
010004 - Mae Is Performing At A Club
X1001 - Mae Is Being Held Captive
010010 - The Chemicals Cannot Be Synthesized - Malice Needs To Seek Out The Source
010011 - H.E.R.B.I.E. Can Synthesize The Chemicals, But Requires Ingredients
01002 - Mae Is The One Who Spread The Photos
01003 - Mae Is Dead
X101 - Sue Lies About The Photos
01010 - The Photos Spread Across The Internet
010100 - Doom's Time Machine
010101 - Doom's Nanites
01011 - The Photos Are Leaked To The Tabloids
X102 - Sue Asks Where Janet Found The Photos
01020 - A Passionately Devoted (and Perverted) Fanclub
01021 - A Sick Trade In Superheroine Memorabilia
0103 - Sue Storm Suddenly Finds She Cannot Remember
01030 - Mae Takes An Interest in Johnny Storm
01031 - Mae Takes An Interest in Reed Richards
01032 - Mae Takes An Interest in Ben Grimm
X11 - A perfect deepfake of Susan Storm is taking the internet by storm
X110 - Reed Doesn't Notice
X1100 - A Tentacle Monster Is Attacking The Fulton St. Fish Market!
011000 - Sue Floats Down On An Invisible Forcefield To Protect Bystanders
011001 - Sue Is Suddenly Aware of all the Cameras and Stays in the Fantasticar
01101 - A Swarm of Giant Bees Attacking A Flower Parade!
0111 - Reed Notices, But... (Can't Get It Up)
X12 - The photos are of an alternate Susan Storm
0120 - As A Man of Science, Reed Richards is Intrigued
01200 - Susan van Doom
01201 - Sue Storm, Queen of the Mole Man
0121 - As A Man, Reed Richards Is Intrigued
X13 - The Photos Are A Memetic Hazard
0130 - Awake But Confused
0131 - Unconscious And Vulnerable

X2 - Moonstone - Subtly manipulate Sue Storm through therapy
X20 - Sue Allows Herself To Be Hypnotized
X200 - Mary Jane Watson (bisexual/lesbian path)
X2000 - Reed Richards Has Trouble Getting Hard
X20000 - Reed Called Out Someone Else's Name
X200000 - Spider-Man
X2000000 - Couples Therapy
X20000000 - Reed Was Thinking About Mary Jane Watson
020000001 - Reed Was Thinking About Sue With Peter Parker
02000001 - Sex Therapy
X200001 - Ben Grimm
02000010 - Talk With Reed About Ben
02000011 - Talk With Ben About Reed
X20001 - She Found Reed's Porn Stash
X2001 - Reed Richards Has Never Given Sue Storm A Climax
020010 - Sex Toys
020011 - Sex Therapy
02002 - Sue Storm Turns Invisible During Sex
020010 - Advanced Masturbation Techniques
020011 - Sex Machine
X201 - She-Hulk
02010 - Susan Storm Is A Little Wet
02011 - Susan Storm Is Dry
X21 - Sue Does Not Allow Herself To Be Hypnotized
X210 - Sue Wants To Overcome Her Gag Reflex
02100 - Practice On A Dildo
02101 - Practice On Reed Richards
0211 - Sue Wants Greater Mastery of Her Powers
X22 - Sue Passes Out Before She Can Answer
X220 - Sue Cannot Fall Asleep Without An Orgasm
02200 - Sue Spends A Restless Night
02201 - Sue Masturbates To Get Some Sleep
0221 - Sue Grows Hornier and Hornier But Cannot Climax
X23 - Sue Is Already Hypnotized, She Just Doesn't Know It
X230 - Moonstone Gives Sue Storm Something To Think About
X2300 - Sexually Frustrating
X23000 - Sue Storm Is Encouraged To Seek Sexual Relief (But Not Find It)
X230000 - Sue Storm Cums When She Thinks of Cheating on Reed Richards
02300000 - Reed Richards Is The Smartest Man In The World - He Knew Immediately
02300001 - Reed Richards May Be Smart, But He Is Blissfully Ignorant
0230001 - Whenever Someone Says "Cheat," Sue Almost Cums
0230002 - Sue and Reed's Relationship Grows Strained
023001 - Dr. Stone Encourages Sue Storm To Watch More Porn
023002 - Sue Storms Spends The Entire Session Fantasizing About Dr. Stone
02301 - Sexually Freeing
0231 - Moonstone Rubs Sue Storm's Pussy Through Her Clothes
02310 - Sue Storm Wakes Up Wet Every Morning
02311 - Sue Storm Finds Herself Thinking About Dr. Stone Frequently

X3 - Shocker - The way to a woman's heart is through carefully applied vibrations. Battles with the Shocker become...stimulating.
X30 - Sue Storm Is Attending A Women In STEM Luncheon
X300 - Sue Storm Cums In Public
03000 - Sue Pursues The Shocker
03001 - Sue Saves Injured Civilians
0301 - Sue Storm Blacks Out
031 - Sue Storm Is Clothes Shopping

X4 - Nightmare - Haunt Sue Storm's dreams.
X40 - A Dream of Pleasure
X400 - Psi-Lord!
04000 - Valeria Von Doom
04001 - Psi-Lord Again
0401 - Her Brother, Johnny Storm!
X41 - A Dream of Power & Domination
0410 - Her Own Face (Malice route)
0411 - Reed Richards

X5 - Mr. Mxyzptlk - Make Sue lose control of her powers.
X50 - Sue starts to make other's clothing invisible
0500 - Alicia Masters Wanders In Before Sue Can Get Her Powers Under Control
0501 - She-Hulk Wanders In In Before Sue Can Get Her Powers Under Control
X51 - Sue's clothing becomes invisible when she's horny
0510 - Sue Does Not Notice Her Clothes Are Becoming Invisible
0511 - Sue Notices What's Happening

X6 - Porkum - Seduce Sue Storm while she's vulnerable
X60 - Defraudium
X600 - Porkum Sends Sue Storm Some Handmade Milk Chocolates
X6000 - Sue Resists The Urge, But Saves Them For Later
X60000 - Porkum's Organic Nut Milk
0600000 - Strange, Erotic Dreams Assail Her
0600001 - Sue Storm's Appetite Goes Into Overdrive
060001 - Pink Panties
X6001 - Sue Pigs Out And Eats The Entire Box
X60010 - Sue Cannot Resist Devouring the Entire Box Again
X600100 - Sue Tracks Down Porkum
X6001000 - Sue Storm Gets Distracted Going Through The Kitchen Where The Chocolates Are Made
X6001001 - Sue Storm Catches Porkum Masturbating On The Toilet
060010010 - Porkum Tries To Find The Invisible Woman By Scent
060010011 - Porkum Tries To Find THe Invisible Woman By Touch
06001002 - Porkum Catches Sue Storm Unawares
0600101 - Sue Calls For Help
060011 - Sue Resists The Urge To Pig Out Again
X6002 - Not Without Regret, Sue Dumps The Box In The Trash
X60020 - Sue Digs The Chocolates Out Of The Trash
X600200 - A Photo of Porkum's Cock
X6002000 - Sue Cannot Get The Image of Porkum's Cock Out Of Her Mind
060020000 - Sue Is Feverish And Craves Porkum's Cock
0600200000 - Porkum Sends Sue A Dildo Cast From His Own Cock
0600200001 - Porkum Sends Sue Another Picture
060020001 - A Call From Her Husband
060020002 - H.E.R.B.I.E. has Analyzed the Sample
06002001 - Sue Asks For Help
060020010 - Sue Storm Is Dying Without Porkum's Cum
060020011 - Sue Storm Is Gorging Herself On Porkum's Chocolates
0600201 - A Photo of Porkum's Balls Dipped In Chocolate
060021 - Sue Frigs Herself To Sleep
X6003 - Sue Saves The Chocolates For Later...But Malice Has Other Plans
060030 - The Chemicals Cannot Be Synthesized - Malice Needs To Seek Out The Source
0600300 - Make A Deal With Porkum
0600301 - Capture Porkum For Further Research
0600302 - Milk Porkum Dry
060031 - The Chemicals Can Be Synthesized - Malice Needs The Right Ingredients
0600310 - Rob A Mutant Sperm Bank
0600311 - Attack Wolverine and Cut Off His Cock and Balls
060032 - H.E.R.B.I.E. can synthesize the active component - Malice is here to stay
X601 - An Emergency Forces An Injured Invisivle Woman Back Into Action
06010 - A Chunk of Defraudium
06011 - His Huge Pink Cock
0602 - Porkum Invades The Baxter Building
061 - Sue Wins A Date With Porkum - For Charity

07 - Ruby Thursday - Has a diabolical plan
070 - Ruby Takes Sue's Body
071 - Ruby Takes Sue's Head
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The Walrus
Susan Storm wouldn't refuse a gift.
A - Chocolate
B - Romance novels

The Vulture
Sue Storm's cannot look away when invisible.
A - A Secret Mission from SHIELD
B - Flashing

Superia
Make Sue realize her superiority as a woman
A - A media scandal around the male members of the Fantastic Four
B - An infusion of power to corrupt her

Feel free to add suggestions...and if you want to see more chapters on a particular branch, like it!

Updates are going to be slow at first; I was feeling pretty burned out near the end of LLNO.

 

[TheLowKing]

OK, sure, but when do any of them go to Mars, through the portal to Hell, to rip & tear??

 

[exxxidor456]

Lots of great ideas there! I'd say the Mysterio and Nightmare options sound the most interesting to me. Certainly invading and corrupting Sue's dreams will give you plenty of room for creativity, since anything can happen in dreams!

I think it's a good idea to hold back and not jump straight to the sex, as it always carries more weight if it's properly built up to. But I do hope things get very hot and steamy for Sue before too long. And I hope there's plenty of kink involved too, as it's always my firm belief that Sue Storm represses a very dark and nasty sexual dark-side.

 

[GamerChick077]

Enlisting Super sounds like it would backfire on Doom. It would make him look stupid.

 

[Zeebop]

Enlisting Super sounds like it would backfire on Doom. It would make him look stupid.

If the plot succeeds, then Doom takes credit. If the plot fails, it's the other villain's fault and Doom learns something. So from his perspective, it's win-win.

 

[GamerChick077]

If the plot succeeds, then Doom takes credit. If the plot fails, it's the other villain's fault and Doom learns something. So from his perspective, it's win-win.

But surely Superia would double cross him if he's a guy? Does Doom have some preparation for this?

 

[Zeebop]

Oh, most of them have their own plans. Doom knows this. Doom is prepared.

 

[Zeebop]

General update schedule: going to try to keep it at 1-2 chapters a day for a while. Don't want to get burned out, don't want to just churn out quick, half-assed chapters. I have a vague idea of where I want some of these storylines to go, but I always accept comments and suggestions on where readers would like things to go. As I said, going to try and keep things sexy but largely not-explicit for a while; Sue isn't just going to drop her panties at the first opportunity. Gotta work up to it, make the villains work a bit.

 

[exxxidor456]

1-2 chapters a day sounds fine to me!

It will be fun to see how the various villains corrupt Sue, and how much resistance she puts up in each scenario.

 

[exxxidor456]

The Moonstone strand looks promising! It will be interesting to see what kind of psychological manipulations she'll bring to bear on Sue.

 

[exxxidor456]

I'm loving it so far! I hope you get plenty of likes so we get plenty of chapters!

 

[Zeebop]

Individual branches are going to slow down a bit as the story starts to branch out due to likes, but I am keeping track of everything.

 

[Zeebop]

Updated the top-level. Still going slow. Don't want to rush things.

 

[exxxidor456]

I'm glad to see the likes are racking up.

 

[Zeebop]

Apologies on the slowness for some of the branches, trying to adjust writing schedule to chapter priority as determined by likes.

 

[Zeebop]

Updated the branch ideas. Gives a hint of where things are going - but I'm always open to suggestions.

 

[Zeebop]

We hit 25 likes for the Introduction, which means the 5th branch villain. I'm debating who gets the honor - I had initially played with the idea of the Walrus and a slow weight gain arc, but that's not everybody's kink. Porkum, of course, is a reference to an aborted arc on the BEAdventure/Superstories; I was thinking of going a different direction on that, but same basic idea, if I can pull it off. Mr. Mxyzptlk I put in as an example of a DC villain, and because the reality-bending powers make it easy to play around with Sue losing control of her powers, which has possibilities.

But, open to preferences.

 

[exxxidor456]

I'm not particularly interested in weight gain stories, so that would be my least favourite option.

I quite like the idea of mixing things up and bringing in a DC villain. Certainly opens up a whole new world of possibilities.

 

[GamerChick077]

You could try putting the kinks in the chapter title as a warning.

 

[Zeebop]

I might. I generally prefer it to be more character-driven than specifically kink-driven, though.