Help me write: Over powering the woman

StanS55

StanS55

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It's totally out of my writing wheelhouse here but I have a branch that feels like the man over powering and taking the beautiful girl it's great fit, but just not happy with how its turning out. Would really appreciate if someone pointed me to chapters they loved so I could learn a bit.

Note that I'm not looking for extreme flavors of humiliation/torture/non-con to reference.

Hope that made sense, thanks all!
 
StanS55 said:
It's totally out of my writing wheelhouse here but I have a branch that feels like the man over powering and taking the beautiful girl it's great fit, but just not happy with how its turning out. Would really appreciate if someone pointed me to chapters they loved so I could learn a bit.

Note that I'm not looking for extreme flavors of humiliation/torture/non-con to reference.

Hope that made sense, thanks all!
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I think I may have an idea well two actually I'll put them on here for you.
 
This one from At the cabin is a more recent addition from JohnLocke4's thread where a character is gently dominating a beautiful woman who happens to be his current gf's best friend. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Brandon-Wants-To-Make-Sure-Vicky-Is-Okay.462335. The second idea that comes to mind it's story may not be what your looking for however the main male character is clearly using a woman's weakness to dominate her without humiliation or non-con which is called "Knocked up Notions" which was originally written by Torg and I hope he continues writing cause he is really good in my opinion. This particular thread written by DamianWhite is just an example. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Sam-can't-stop.138128 I hope these are what you were thinking of idea wise. Happy Writing StanS55
 
Marlikton said:
This one from At the cabin is a more recent addition from JohnLocke4's thread where a character is gently dominating a beautiful woman who happens to be his current gf's best friend. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Brandon-Wants-To-Make-Sure-Vicky-Is-Okay.462335. The second idea that comes to mind it's story may not be what your looking for however the main male character is clearly using a woman's weakness to dominate her without humiliation or non-con which is called "Knocked up Notions" which was originally written by Torg and I hope he continues writing cause he is really good in my opinion. This particular thread written by DamianWhite is just an example. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Sam-can't-stop.138128 I hope these are what you were thinking of idea wise. Happy Writing StanS55
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Thanks! My writing is generally in the romantic and impreg so while these weren't as forceful as I was looking for in my chapter, it is what I normally read so those are bookmarked now. Torg is awesome, haha its lame but I got pumped the first time he liked my story.
 
Don't know if it helps, but the Xiang-thread of my Happy Maid story deals with a woman who slowly develops fantasies and dreams about being overpowered. The development is subtle, and the scenes will only get more strict at a later stage (maybe not even reaching your "extreme" point at all at this point of writing).

Likewise, my The Invitation story deals with a young man who gets introduced into the a BDSM party and slowly develops interest into the topic. Could also give you some ideas about how to get into the mindset of a person who likes to overpower others.
 
Javalar said:
Don't know if it helps, but the Xiang-thread of my Happy Maid story deals with a woman who slowly develops fantasies and dreams about being overpowered. The development is subtle, and the scenes will only get more strict at a later stage (maybe not even reaching your "extreme" point at all at this point of writing).

Likewise, my The Invitation story deals with a young man who gets introduced into the a BDSM party and slowly develops interest into the topic. Could also give you some ideas about how to get into the mindset of a person who likes to overpower others.
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Ummm.. so about this story the Invitation..

Spectacular work. I'm a big fan of creating game mode stories and you just did a knock out job. It really helps highlight the different desires in that umbrella.

I felt like it also had the cool effect of letting you browse and see what interests you, get some insights and like a personality quiz track and see your own results.

I'm still reading it, just won the chair bet and was in edge of my seat there no joke. But I hit 6k with 1 AP left but cant open blonde reward chapter..

Really impressed at what you've made and I look forward to continuing.
 
Wow, thank you! This is... very nice to hear. :)

Can you leave a comment right at the chapter where you have the problem? Would probably help me to track down the mistake in the code more easily.

Also, as mentioned in the introduction, this story is, in theory, open for collaboration, as it should be rather easy to add just another encounter, etc. So, if you feel inspired... :)
 
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