Idea for "Living Vagina" Story

[TekoPenn]

Lately, I've been following this story "Too Good For Too Long" (https://chyoa.com/story/Too-Good-For-Too-Long.44025) and while the whole "swapping the pussy and the mouth" isn't exactly my thing, I am fascinated by the first few chapters where the aliens mistakenly treat the FL's vagina as a person rather than the FL herself.

After looking more out of curiosity if there's anything similar, I remembered this one story on Literotica about a fairy bringing a woman's vagina to life for shits and giggles(https://www.literotica.com/s/night-of-the-living-pussy). With these two in mind, I got this idea for what could be my own spin on the "living pussy."

It starts with our FL getting in a bad accident. Fortunately, a supernatural being (alien, fae, whatever, I haven't decided yet) happens to be passing by and saves her life. However, they don't really know much about human anatomy and evidently brings her vagina to life.

Now, our FL has to figure out how to keep her newly awakened pussy under control, especially as Kitty, as she prefers to called now, wants above all else a girlfriend of her own.

A few other things:

• Kitty has the overall personality of a bratty, horny teenager, constantly thinking about and talking about sex.
• She can't really talk, but she can send her thoughts to our main lead.
• She has a fair degree of control over the hip and legs. FL can still walk if she concentrates. Of course, if she's not careful, Kitty can make her slip, or step on someone's toes, etc.
• Kitty is almost-obsessively attracted to women, which surprises FL who thinks she's straight. She isn't.

Anyhow, I'd love some feedback on this.

 

[Zeebop]

I can't throw stones - I wrote a branch where the main character's womb gains sentience.

You'll want to think up a plot: is this "getting through my daily life while my talking vagina makes that difficult," or "I have to find some way to shut my talking vagina up," or "My talking vagina is actually my super power" ?

So examples of those:

- The protagonist has graduated highschool and headed to her first semester at college. She was involved in a car accident on prom night and almost died - her girlfriend did die - and now she's half a year behind her peers, and she hears Kitty's voice coming from her pussy...which is going to make surviving her freshman year all the more difficult!

- The protagonist is a thirty-something Army wife, trying to keep up the family farm while her husband is deployed. One night she goes out to see what's bothering the cows...and the aliens abduct her by mistake. When she wakes up in the field next morning, she'd naked and her pussy is talking to her. The cows be damned, she needs to find some way to fix this before her husband gets home in three days!

- The protagonist is the best detective in Central City...a pillar of the Vice unit that combats the rampant drugs and prostitution in the metropolis. Her secret is she has a superpower: the ability to secret pheromones that affect humans, making them pliable and answer her questions; vaginal muscles that can crush a gun barrel and immune to bullets or knife-strikes; a strong resistance to drugs administered via superhuman pussy; and even superhuman senses down there. The only catch is...her pussy talks to her. And all of her powers are technically Kitty's. So when the protagonist goes undercover at a strip joint to break up a humantrafficking operation, she's going to have to keep Kitty happy to make this case.

 

[TheLowKing]

- The protagonist is a thirty-something Army wife, trying to keep up the family farm while her husband is deployed. One night she goes out to see what's bothering the cows...and the aliens abduct her by mistake. When she wakes up in the field next morning, she'd naked and her pussy is talking to her. The cows be damned, she needs to find some way to fix this before her husband gets home in three days!

Ah yes, the aliens only abducted her by accident. They were really trying to install a talking vagina on a cow. This explains everything.

 

[Zeebop]

How else would it complete its mission?

 

[TekoPenn]

You'll want to think up a plot: is this "getting through my daily life while my talking vagina makes that difficult," or "I have to find some way to shut my talking vagina up," or "My talking vagina is actually my super power" ?

Well, I feel "getting through daily life with my talking vagina" would be what I'm going for. You are right that I need to think up a basic plot, since I failed to do that with my last story.

So examples of those:

- The protagonist has graduated highschool and headed to her first semester at college. She was involved in a car accident on prom night and almost died - her girlfriend did die - and now she's half a year behind her peers, and she hears Kitty's voice coming from her pussy...which is going to make surviving her freshman year all the more difficult!

- The protagonist is a thirty-something Army wife, trying to keep up the family farm while her husband is deployed. One night she goes out to see what's bothering the cows...and the aliens abduct her by mistake. When she wakes up in the field next morning, she'd naked and her pussy is talking to her. The cows be damned, she needs to find some way to fix this before her husband gets home in three days!

- The protagonist is the best detective in Central City...a pillar of the Vice unit that combats the rampant drugs and prostitution in the metropolis. Her secret is she has a superpower: the ability to secret pheromones that affect humans, making them pliable and answer her questions; vaginal muscles that can crush a gun barrel and immune to bullets or knife-strikes; a strong resistance to drugs administered via superhuman pussy; and even superhuman senses down there. The only catch is...her pussy talks to her. And all of her powers are technically Kitty's. So when the protagonist goes undercover at a strip joint to break up a human trafficking operation, she's going to have to keep Kitty happy to make this case.

The first two don't sound too bad. The first is the closest to what I had in mind. That last example, though, I'm not too sure about.

I mean, sure, we're talking about a story where a woman's vagina is sentient, but how exactly would she find out she could break guns and knifes with it, and that it can resist drugs?

 

[Zeebop]

The hard way, I imagine.

Anyway, just ideas. Even if you want to focus on a slice-of-life, you need a set-up...is she a career woman whose pussy starts talking to her one day, and she wonders if her biological clock has driven her to schizophrenia? Is she a college student recovering from a terrible accident that saw her receive a vagina transplant? A stripper with a drug habit who is trying really hard to follow the rules and not get lured into prostitution or porn, even though that's where Kitty says the money is?