Impregnable Tower of Fertile Monster Girls

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  1. merkros

    merkros CHYOA Guru

    "Every party needs a pooper, that's why they invited you. Party pooper....Party pooper..."

    In all seriousness, it is always important to make things clear so that there are no misunderstandings. So Fixed. Thanks for catching that out!
     
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  2. merkros

    merkros CHYOA Guru

    Surprise! Remember me?

    I got a surprise update to the Monster Boy branch of the story!
    Monster Boys - (In Progress)

    • Floor 1 (Catboy Brigands) - (In Progress)
      • Intro - (Complete)
      • Sex Scene(Monster Boy, Rape, Impregnation) - (Complete)
        • Bad End- (Complete)
      • Choice A - (Outlined)
        • Sex Scene(Monster Boy, Rape, Impregnation) -(Outlined)
        • Bad End - (Outlined)
      • Choice B - (Outlined)
        • Sex Scene(Monster Boy, Blowjob, Watersports) - (Outlined)
        • Sex Scene(Monster Boy, Rape, Impregnation) - (Outlined)
        • Bad end - (Outlined)
      • Conclusion - (Outlined)
    So i also managed to complete the first Bad End for Floor 2 of the Monster Girls branch.

    Floor 2 (Catgirl Twins) - (In Progress)



      • Intro - (Complete)
        • Bad End (Orgy, Impregnation, Anthro-Furry, Other things i'm not sure how to tag yet. Circe has a rat problem, yasee.) - (Complete)


    That one isn't going to be released yet, because I feel like it's important for a Game Story to get all of the available options out in the open before publishing the chapter. I still have a few more options to write on the Catgirl Twins branch before I release it. My idea of just releasing it one floor at a time just really isn't feasible. I'm packing a lot more choices into some of these Floors than I was really planning on doing so from the start. Also, I just need a bit of a breather. I spent a lot of time trying to pump those chapters out and didn't want another who knows how long to go without any sort of update.

    Now, why did it take so long? Well, there are a few reasons.

    Obviously, one is that I just don't have a lot of time to write with a full-time job. So I have to kind of ration my time around writing, relaxation, and work.
    I have other writing projects in the works that I've been jumping between. This includes a 3-part Novelette about Dragons that got way out of hand. (it was only supposed to be a 1 part short story...)
    I also have to kind of admit that the floor 2 bad end bogged me down a little bit. It's a very "fate worse than death" kind of deal and I took a lot of time trying to hammer it out.

    Anyway, I'll be honest. I started Floor 1 of the Monster Boys arc mostly so that I had something substantial that I could post an update with. I didn't want to just be "Hay guys, I'm still doing things." and not have anything to show for it. So i spent much of the day knocking out the first part of the first floor and outlining the rest of the Floor. As stated, I spent a lot of time on that Bad End chapter and want to make sure I have options that don't lead to bad ends before i release it.
     
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  3. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Awesome. Glad to see this is still alive.
     
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  4. merkros

    merkros CHYOA Guru

    Don't think i've forgotten about this!

    So far this year I've been miserable, absolutely miserable, super miserable, quit my job, felt better, got a new job, and now i actually have time to pursue some interests. I think getting floor 2 out before the end of the month is very possible! I only have a few more chapters left to write on it. On top of all the work on actually writing the story, I've managed to get the next floor mostly outlined and finally reveal what the girl for Floor 3 will be!

    So here's the update to the First Post outline:
    • Floor 2 (Catgirl Twins) - (In Progress)
      • Intro - (Complete)
        • Bad End (Orgy, Impregnation, Anthro-Furry, Other things i'm not sure how to tag. Circe has a rat problem, yasee.) - (Complete)
      • Combat Encounter - (Complete)
        • Bad End ( basically same as above) - (Complete)
        • Bonus Bad End (Rape, Impregnation, Bondage, Betrayal) - (Outlined)
      • Dilemma - (Complete)
      • Sex Scene(Monster Girl, Pregnancy Risk) - (Complete)
      • Sex Scene(Monster Girl, Top/Bottom Switch, Impregnation) - (In Progress)
        • Bad End - (Outlined)
      • Sex Scene(Threesome, Monster Girl, Impregnation) (Outlined)
        • Bad End - (Outlined)
      • Conclusion - (Complete)
    • Floor 3 (Goblin Engineer) - (Outlined)
      • Intro - (Outlined)
      • Combat Encounter (Outlined)
        • Sex Scene/Bad End (Multiple Females, Necrophilia? Kinda sorta not really, Death by Snu Snu) - (Outlined)
      • Dilemma - (No Progress)
      • Combat Encounter - (Outlined)
        • Sex Scene (Bondage, Handjob, Sex toy, Artificial Insemination) - (Outlined)
        • Sex Scene (Maledom, mild asphyxiation, Pregnancy Risk) - (Outlined)
      • Conclusion - (Outlined)
    Floor 2 wasn't originally going to be this long but with two... "Heroines" I felt the need to give a couple of extra scenes that focused on one, or the other. However, the setup led to the floor going from having Two sex scenes to having Five(!). I think much of this stems from just how long it's taken me to work out these chapters. I've had a year to think about them and all that time I've thought about how I wanted to address them and kept adding a little more each time.

    I hope that I don't start adding a 2.5 times increase to every chapter, or I might not finish this story until after I retire!

    Finally, the addition of Dilemma was something that I was going to have to do eventually. They're just things to flesh out the story a little and add a little bit of variety. My original vision was just to have Floor > Battle with Subject of the Floor > Sex >bad/good ends. However, that would get boring very quickly. Dilemmas are non-combat decisions that could theoretically change up your experience for multiple playthroughs. Some of them might lead to different enemies to encounter, a bonus scene, or a bad end. It could be as simple as deciding which path in a forest to take, or which girl at the tavern you want to bang. They probably won't affect the overall plot as there are going to be very few things that actually do that, but variety is the spice of life. Also, not every floor will likely have a Dilemma. If I can't think of a good one for a floor, then I'd rather have a shorter floor than have something for something's sake.


    I'm treating Pregnancy Risk and Impregnation as different things in this outline. The line is very thin and they're probably pretty swappable, but I'm going to try to go with "Pregnancy Risk" which means that the possibility of getting pregnant is directly mentioned by the characters, but you don't see the consequences of the act. One could argue that Rosie from Floor 1 asking the MC not to come inside could constitute as 'pregnancy risk' and it could, but my rationale is rather superfluous. I know it's a Fetish Story, but having to copy/paste the same tags 100 times makes the outline look kind of bland! :p

    "Impregnation" means that something happens or is going to happen that quantifies that Impregnation did in fact happen. This could be Circe's brand flaring up, or someone saying "You definitely knocked me up" or a following scene that shows that pregnancy is happening. Not every sex scene is going to have a pregnancy follow-up. Even if that character did get pregnant in my headcanon!

    Just as a reminder:

    (Complete) - Means that the chapter is ready to be published. I try my best not to post the chapter until the whole floor is done so that all of the options that are available are available for the Game Mode.
    (In Progress) - This means that the chapter is what I'm going to be working on next or currently in the process of writing.
    (Outlined) - This means that I have a pretty good idea of what's going to happen in that chapter, but I haven't started writing it. Ideas are always subject to change.
    (No Progress) - I haven't decided what to do with this yet and it may or may not be a thing
     
    Last edited: Nov 10, 2023
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  5. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I'm glad this is continuing and that you're doing better!
     
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  6. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    It really fixes all problems, doesn't it?