Lois Lane's Night Out

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Mar 27, 2018.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    We're heading into the final stretch, by which I mean there are currently only 106 ending chapters to be written to cap off all existing branches.

    Now, that doesn't mean there won't be more chapters to write; if someone does an archive binge and leaves a bunch of likes that could trigger a bunch more chapters to be written. But LLNO has seriously slowed down on likes recently, and is slipping the ratings pretty fast, so as it stands, we're pretty close to complete.
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Updates are going to be few and sporadic for a bit; real-life is getting complicated again.
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I know folks aren't thrilled by a lot of these endings - it is difficult, narratively, to craft one or two really good endings, much less a thousand - but once these are sorted out, I can get started on the next story!
     
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  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Oof. It happened. Slipped down into the #10 position on the top rated. Won't be long before LLNO drops off once and for all.

    ...still, it's been a good run.
     
  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I don't think a story can get too big to fail, but I do think it can get...too big.
     
  6. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Sorry for the slow updates, you loyal few. Real life has been busy lately, and I'll be traveling next week, but I'll try to get a few chapters out.
     
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  7. Zeebop

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    The stupider the penultimate chapter, the weirder the ending for any branch will be.
     
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  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    So, barring a sudden influx of likes, by my count there's about 46 ending chapters left to be written...and then the story will be "complete." Or at least, there will be an ending on each branch.
     
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  9. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    I'm getting the distinct feeling you'll be glad to be done with it.
     
  10. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I can see the mistakes I've made in the story. And it's dragged on a lot longer than anyone thought it would. I just hate to leave it unfinished.
     
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  11. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Sorry for missing an update or two, small technical hiccup (some bastard cut the cable that brings internet).
     
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  13. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    22 chapters to be written, for anyone counting the days. Thanks for the folks who have been following and liking for the long haul.

    I might take a little break after LLNO is finished up, but there are two stories I want to launch this year: a LLNO-esque fanfic story starring Sue Storm of the Fantastic Four, and an original fantasy game mode story that hews closer the classic Lone Wolf and Fighting Fantasy game books. The intention for both is to be a little more realistic and less porn-y (although there will still be explicit sex). I've got a 400-chapter outline for the game mode story, and a first chapter written for the fanfic. So might run them concurrently, switch back and forth. Dunno. We'll see how it goes.
     
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  14. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    And after many years, LLNO is off of the top ten. Saw that coming, but still, the end of an era.
     
  15. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    Damn. Feels a bit of a downer given how close you are to finishing it.
     
  16. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    It was kind of inevitable. And hey, making the top ten at all was a bit of an achievement.
     
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  17. Zeebop

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    We're on the final block of chapters! Almost there. Might take me a week, maybe less.
     
  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Total chapters: 7,333

    4 chapters to be written
     
  19. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Total chapters: 7,337

    That's it! All branches are complete. Not planning on writing any more chapters. It may have ended on a whimper, but it had a good run. There were some solid chapters and popular branches; and some silliness and a few mean bits I'm not proud of. While there weren't a lot of back-and-forth with other writers, I like to think I tried to follow what they wrote when they did contribute. Overall, a bit of a good learning experience. The concept of the story changed a bit as it got bigger and bigger - I had initially hoped for it to be more tightly plotted, more consistent, but that wasn't possible as the branches got weirder. There was quite an emphasis on transformation, futanari, and impregnation; that was the result of certain decisions made in early chapters that had to be continued through in later ones.

    Overall, I have to say I enjoyed the epilogue chapters best, since they gave me more room to go beyond the one night out and look at lasting effects and changes in Lois Lane's life and character. You can see that's where I tend to get my most romantic, but also the most consistent in terms of characterization.

    It's been fun. Thanks for reading.
     
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  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    The biggest problem with DOOMED so far is sometimes I get lost and write Lois Lane instead of Sue Storm. I've got to try and branch out in how I wrote characters.
     
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