Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Hey, I wanted more on how crazy and inconsistent Lucy is :D. John too, but Lucy - to a far higher degree. When a story stretches its own writer's suspension of disbelief it is a good sign, right?

I am trying to import one other branches from the original story and, so far, I am failing to make Lucy believable enough to post them :D I want to make it less absurd than the original, damn it!
 
Hvast said:
Hey, I wanted more on how crazy and inconsistent Lucy is :D. John too, but Lucy - to a far higher degree. When a story stretches its own writer's suspension of disbelief it is a good sign, right?

I am trying to import one other branches from the original story and, so far, I am failing to make Lucy believable enough to post them :D I want to make it less absurd than the original, damn it!
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You know, I actually jerked off to the original and it's to a scene that wasn't in the remake lol

And yeah, I wasn't on the top of my game with this segment.
 
To be fair I was going to ask M&G to review Good Sex when I eventually finish and post the damn thing. Last few months have been terrible for my writing.
 
Good sex? So we've come full circle.

I don't mind this story going in hibernation, maybe we need a year or so of hiatus to get a new batch of authors
 
I got it! Cause it's the same last name as Marcie and the same first name as Susan... So obviously it would be extremely unpalatable for Gina and Marcie to a lesser degree!

Also I am definitely asking for a follow up on Tower after this current floor :D
 
TheLeherengin said:
I got it! Cause it's the same last name as Marcie and the same first name as Susan... So obviously it would be extremely unpalatable for Gina and Marcie to a lesser degree!

Also I am definitely asking for a follow up on Tower after this current floor :D
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Hoho indeed! I was secretly hoping for exxidor to submit his Susan Storm story just for that, but alas it never happened.

And yup, feel free to submit whenever, we did get a bunch of new voices for Marcie and Gina to bitch about after all XD



Zeebop said:
Response posted. I didn't touch the Susan Storm bit. Are you putting Clothes for Likes on the list for review?

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Alex-(♀)-and-Rory-(♀)-read-Gina-&-Marcie-read-"Good-Sex".1524675
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All my stories are open for masochist mode by default, so yup, feel free to go nuts. It's only twelve chapters, but these are some pretty beefy chapters
 
It's basically something I was just working on in my spare time. Dustbin and Tower have had most of my attention, so Hunters, Gate and even Doom have been sort of put on the backburner.
 
...I mean, Lois Lane fucks Cthulhu at one point. There are multiple Lovecraftian branches in LLNO. You just don't read those.
 
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