Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Thanks for the read!

 

I'm feeling open to my work being savaged mercilessly for a few laughs. Any chance Marcie and Gina could take a look at Strange Magic? https://chyoa.com/story/Strange-Magic.59355

 

Not a problem. They are on it.

 

So far not a single story has driven me far enough to use “Sweet Home Alabama” as BGM and this one ain’t gonna do it either!
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Strange-Magic,-by-Misterman1965.1550090

 

XD you know I did say once we were done with Iralia, I'd put Tower back up for review since it's been about... What two three floors since their last review and probably at least almost a year?

 

Thanks for covering my basic-ass story. I'm surprised how relatively gentle Marcie and Gina were with it. Most of their issues with it were actually pretty fair.
Unoriginal premise and kinks - check.
Not trusting the reader to get the jokes - yeah, a little.
The girls getting a bit more generic once they are mind-controlled - kind of. Maybe that's a bit difficult to avoid with mind control.
Sneaking incest into the seemingly non-incest branch of the story - I feel kind of bad about that.
Indulgently self-aware lampshade hanging - True, and how!

If I were able to do that, I might spend a lot less time writing.

What I will not stand for is my username being referred to as "boomer"! 1965 is the start of Gen X.

Seriously, I very much enjoyed the review.

 

@MisterMan1965

Glad you enjoyed it!

There was genuinely very little to complain with this one. It unfortunately happened to be of a subject matter both girls strongly dislike. If I knew incest was that prevalent I would have send out my incest characters to cover it lol

Also don't worry, Gina is in her early twenties, she calls everyone above thirty a Boomer

Sure, I slot you in. We have quite a lot of new voices for them to dunk on after all

 

Yeah, I need to Masochist mode a few stories, too. Just been busy.

 

I forgot which one you still need to tackle but it definitely can't be many left lol

 

I think it's one or two of Leherengin's latest efforts. I've just been waiting until I finish writing all the endings for this column on the spreadsheet (10 left, at this time of writing) before tackling one.

 

Ooh always excited for more I really need to finish my Advanced Fantasy review...

 

I'd like to take a shot because there's been far too much happiness in my life recently.

Roxanne the Punk Princess

https://chyoa.com/story/Roxanne-the-Punk-Princess-(ENF).58882

 

Oh hey, has been a long while since I was able to say this but

Added to the backlog

 

Awesome! I'm surprised it's been a while. I thought about this over a year ago but you were very busy at the time.

 

Let's get a backlog going.
It doesn't have any kinky gladiattixes in it, but can Gina and Marcie go over Cozy and KInky?
Next story I get them to look at will be the one with the sexy pirate I promise. I just have to publish a few more chapters in it.

 

If y'all are still waiting there's always Masochist Mode. Roast me!

 

XD, this will definitely upset Gina in more ways then one.

Added it to the backlog

 

I'd love to have my story Sins of the Father read.

It will be interesting to see how far they drag me over the coals for it.

 

Based on the synopsis alone, you better prepare yourself for the worst XD

Added to the backlog

 

Oh I'm totally sure I'm gonna get annhilated. But I've enjoyed reading a number of the reviews and I'm curious enough to see what other's think that I'll take the beating gladly.