Mind Controlling protaganist poorly written victims

[tinoking]

I honestly was thinking about my last post and quickly deleted it thing seem to have a hard time writing in the case of fan fiction characters being mind-controlled in the characterization department as I want them to still feel like them just with the changes made by the protagonist and I feel I'm struggling to do that my poor grammar punctuation does not help for the ones being controlled I'm not wanting to the whole yes master no master thing I thought posting in rp for help but honestly I might just post here instead I dunno

 

[CurvyLinesEverywhere]

I'm not sure how to respond to this. You're saying that you want your MC stories to read like they're about an accurate portrayal of the fan fiction character, and the thing holding you back is that you can't write that character well? Or maybe can't write well, in general, because of your condition?

I'm afraid that the only possible solutions I can think of are to either learn to write better, hire an editor to proofread your work for you, or go full Chuck Tingle. And depending on who you ask, that last one might not even be possible.