Morgan's Lunch Break

A bit fast paced for me, though you do manage to build up a decent setting and don't do the mortal sin of listing the characters attributes like some stories do. The sex scenes are also pretty quick.
 
Fierbali111 said:
A bit fast paced for me, though you do manage to build up a decent setting and don't do the mortal sin of listing the characters attributes like some stories do. The sex scenes are also pretty quick.
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Admittedly that was the intention of the story for it to be a rush.
 
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