Need feeback on some ideas

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benzor

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Hey everyone,

I'm thinking about starting some new project and I can't really decide what I should do. I have a few ideas, which on the first thought sound good but then I get doubts how much potential they have on a mid/long term.

So maybe I can get some thoughts from others on my ideas:

1a) Magic college - Harry Potter like universe but people learn about their abilities when they become 18
1b) Magic college (celeb edition) - Like 1a) but with a couple of female celebs as students/staff, probably with a male protagonist

2) Celeb Slave Resort - Some resort where celebs do some work as slaves for a some weeks

Hope to hear some thoughts from you.

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what I would like to see from each:
1a) Students try out their new powers on unsuspecting "muggles"
1b) meh
2) Celeb Slave Resort: Celebs go to a resort expecting a relaxing time but are compelled to be slaves (control collar, mind control drug, etc), they spend their vacation as fuck toys and are compelled to make videos saying they were willing participants.
 
Hey benzor!
Well, I have some comments of your ideas:
1a) Actually magicians know about their abilities. If you refer that muggles discover the existence of magic, well that's interesting.
1b) The same as 1A
2) I'm not really on that kind of "forced" stuff. I think that this particular theme is overworked, too many stories about that, but if you want to try it, you can explore on how the different celebrities serve as slaves on the report. In example, Katy Perry gives nude massages, Taylor Swift/Emma Watson do room service, etc.
 
1A- why not make it that their magic developes after losing their virginity. Maybe have them recruited based off a masterbation test then lose their virginity while at school.
1b-nothing wrong with that scenario same with 2
 
For the 1b the issue I see is that usually Celebrities are so because they do something to be famous.

Having multiple celebrities both just 18 and stopping what made them famous to go study at the school would remove a lot of the celebrity aspect of it.
 
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