Seaking a couple Co Authors to help Family Harem

[Jack.smith]

My Story Family Harem has been on the site around 6 Months and has gathered almost 400,000 views which have blown me away.

However, the story has become increasingly tedious to write for and has made me lose
interest.

And so I'm looking for a couple of co Authors to help write chapters and come up with fresh ideas to keep the story more actively updated on the site.

Any new chapters will have to be passed by me.

The story is about Incest so if you're not into that then please don't respond.

Could you send a small example of your work so that I can see what it is like?

Thank you,
Jack.Smith

 

[Fierbali111]

Im probably biased, but your story seems pretty cut and dry as far as incest is concerned. Things become a lot more interesting if there are people other than only the main character having sex in the story. Not only does it give you a break, it also fleshes out the characters nicely. (eg a cheating mother, horny cousin, pervy uncle)


Im not the best at punctuation, however I noticed there were points that seemed pretty rough to read and might need another run through editing wise. Also the dialog seems a bit unnatural, i'd try to imagine how the character would word things given their own background.

 

[Jack.smith]

Yeah, a large proportion of the original stuff was written several years ago but never published and was never properly proofed as it was only for me and the story has gathered a lot more attention than I ever anticipated. I will continue to go back through editing a lot of the writing to make the flow better.

Yeah, I was thinking about stuff like that. I am going to flesh out the Mother and Aunt's relationship more as that like you were saying in a relationship on none protagonist characters, as at the minute it gets about half a chapter to explore and isn't mentioned later. I was thinking perhaps a flashback to a sex scene between them when they were younger.

Thank you.
Big fan of your work,
Jack.Smith